The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the share of the people whose age is 65 and over from 1940 to 2040, in the USA, Sweden and Japan.
It is obvious that in all three countries overall trend is upward. Although the proportion of the population aged 65 and over was highest in the USA among the given countries in 1940, while it is likely that Japan will take lead in 2040.
According to the line graph the percentage of the citizens aged 65 and over in the USA was at around 10%, with 7% in Sweden and just over 5% in Japan at the beginning of the period. After increasing significantly to 15% b...
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