The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first given pie chart illustrates the consumption of energy in percentage wise which is used by the Australians for numerous household activities, where second one revels the proportions of greenhouse gas emission resulted from the energy usage.
Overall, it is very noticeable that energy used for cooling results very low proportion of greenhouse whereas high level of greenhouse gas emits from the energy used for water heating.
The proportion of energy consumption for heating was 42% which was the largest among other sectors. Moreover, the Australians use almost one third of the energy for water heating purpose with 30%. energy used for other application was 15% which is double of refrigeration with 7%. There are nominal level of energy used for cooling as well as lighting purposes and the figures are 2% and 4% respectively.
With 32% emission, water heating was the vital source of greenhouse gas which makes it one third of the total followed by other applications with 28% emission which makes it the second major cause of the greenhouse gas emission. almost same level of greenhouse gas emitted from heating as well as refrigeration and the figures are 15% and 14% successively. The minimal proportion of greenhouse emitted from lighting and cooling with 8% and 3% accordingly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Energy
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Almost
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, moreover, second, so, third, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22274881517 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82592451676 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464454976303 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3655995418 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.444444444 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315933777009 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147365696549 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933073698562 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230364002437 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859260225549 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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