The graph given shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990

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The graph given shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990

The graphs illustrate the proportion of five sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990.

Overall, in both the years the most significant sources of energy is observed for oil and natural gas which together
accounted for more than half of total energy sources, while the hydroelectric power and nuclear power has least amount
of energy. In all types of energy there was only minimal change over next 10 years.

The sources of energy for oil comprised of 42% in the year 1980 and this showed a slightly decrease of 33% after 10 years.
In the similar way drop in amount of energy sources was noticed for natural gas which was 26% in 1980 and 25% in 1990.

With regards to the remaining energy sources, coal generated increase in production from 22% in 1980 to
27% in 1990. In the same manner nuclear power doubled there energy production from 5% in 1980 and 10% ten years later.
In addition, the percentage of energy sources for nuclear power remained constant from 1980 to 1990.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: has the least
...e hydroelectric power and nuclear power has least amount of energy. In all types of ene...
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Suggestion:
...power and nuclear power has least amount of energy. In all types of energy there ...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...of 42% in the year 1980 and this showed a slightly decrease of 33% after 10 years. In the similar ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72988505747 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33124446446 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511494252874 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0538930935 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429796064724 0.215688989381 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22091437488 0.103423049105 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143149734553 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204534202539 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142121523024 0.0819641961636 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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