You have a problem with the neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour In your Letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter:

Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.

Dear John,
I am writing this letter to let you know that there is some water leakage problem in my washroom , as the pipe of your washroom is interconnected with our washroom's ceiling and due to this, there is continuous dripping of water all the day and floor is wet for the whole day.
We have been suffering from this problem from the last five days. We tried to contact you, but you were not at home, and after inquiring neighbors we got to know that you are on vacations. Even though, I called the plumber and showed him the whole situation, the leakage and water dripping from pipe and he wants to have a look at the pipes in your washroom.

Considering this problem, it is my humble request to you to repair the pipe as soon as possible. Perhaps, we will not be able to meet when u will come, as i have some urgent work out of town. So, please call the plumber and try to repair the pipe whenever you will come back home.
I hope you will do it quickly.

Best regards,
Nancy

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ome water leakage problem in my washroom , as the pipe of your washroom is interco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29255319149 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24343615798 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2852023578 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207208560706 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797353763632 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488763961694 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121972505754 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380787178075 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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