Some people prefer to play team sports, while others prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why.
Nowadays there are a lot of different sports, and every single sport requires to have some certain mental characteristics in order to thrive on a particular game. All of the various sport games could be divided by two big groups: individual sports and team sports. Each group has its own advantages and disadvantages, and in the following passages below I will provide some of them.
First of all, individual sports develop sense of self-reliance. For instance, when you play chess, it is only up to you to make a particular decision in the game and subsequently make a move. Moreover, it teaches you to be highly-disciplined, stress tolerated. Thus, doing individual sport can greatly impact your career perspectives, since you tend to be more individualistic and rely only on yourself.
On the other hand, team sports can help grow a sense of community. Team games usually develop skills of working in group, contribution and, of course, leadership. And besides, the existence of mutual goal strengthens the relationships between every member of the team. It is also interesting to point out the mentality of players in team games, because often players sacrifice themselves for the victory, for instance, playing with injury. So, to summarize my point, team games help people to build social interactions with other people, which could be very crucial in some situations, for example, working on a mutual project etc.
Personally, I prefer individual games, because I like to come up with new ideas, formulas, tricks and strategies in order to win. Another thing that I like about individual sports, is that nobody distracts me from my thoughts so I can think and play on my own.
To genuinely wrap it up, sports in general have become a very important part of our lives. Every sport has its pros and cons, and it depends on individual’s preferences what sport to choose, either to play individual game or team game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...n order to thrive on a particular game. All of the various sport games could be divided by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, another thing, for example, for instance, in general, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03115264798 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02580908486 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9416241352 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250434414581 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708434502391 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432284254903 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129999618716 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217122827884 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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