In spite of the advantages of working five days, I prefer to work three days a week for long hours. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
First of all, it is possible to have a fun time. These days, lots of people suffer from air pollution and traffic. When someone works three days, it means that he saves four days for a relatively long vacation and stays away from mentioned troubles. This is a terrific opportunity for people to organize and schedule their time to go to the beach and satisfy from excellent and amusement activities like swimming, scuba diving, or walking on sand stones. Beside, a man or women possibly can grasp this fortune to enjoy from either spending time with sibling or reading a fantastic and useful book about digital camera, satellite, television, or even cell phone.
Furthermore, making a big money is another noticeable support. Nowadays, children and adults need money to purchase whatever they want or like. Having four days free provides folk a great chance to find another part time job or start a new private business in different fields of electronic, mechanic, or chemistry and as a consequence makes countless profit. In additional, these free days can be used to orient and improve individual’s skill or efficiency by learning new information and knowledge about trade and commerce rules and perhaps reach to the extreme rate of interest. For example, somebody can receive to the huge amount of money by learning how to assemble and sell computer to the people.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by some persons who argue that having shorter time is more ideal. Mainly, people would experience a low level of pressure and anxiety, and as a consequence this may prevent from any future illness or disease. However, still I affirm that working for long hours is more pleased. For instance, there are large amount of methods and facilities including meditation or sport exercise that aimed to address this issue and either keep away or completely remove people's stress.
Due to the aforementioned grounds, I think all people should bear in mind that working three days a week is better. Participating tremendous money and enjoyable time are two prime and conspicuous factors that individuals benefit from this choice.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35// it is low. Need to focus on the topic. for example:
not:
working for long hours is more pleased.
but:
working three days a week for long hours is more pleased.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 387 350
No. of Characters: 1894 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.435 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.619 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.368 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.587 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.041 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big money'.
Suggestion: big money
...even cell phone. Furthermore, making a big money is another noticeable support. Nowadays...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...des folk a great chance to find another part time job or start a new private business in ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...semble and sell computer to the people. Admittedly, there are some justification...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
... pleased. For instance, there are large amount of methods and facilities including med...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259259259259 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.157407407407 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0856481481481 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0185185185185 0.0685040099705 27% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.099537037037 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0347222222222 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74965755741 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347222222222 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0856481481481 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162037037037 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115740740741 0.0139019557991 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2343.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 387.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05426356589 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35142118863 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286821705426 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191214470284 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116279069767 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74965755741 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.524397521467 117% => OK
Word variations: 75.3408267883 59.2087087015 127% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3684210526 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0853501902 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.315789474 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.0505915953 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.84782608696 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224021923079 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0656344690882 0.103427244359 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.060230369891 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494542009997 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141021791709 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858135942575 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695711927137 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272455086897 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0701254976431 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147713474307 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436276093885 0.0618886996521 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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