Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; other have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages if each and support your viewpoint.

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Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; other have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages if each and support your viewpoint.

Nowadays, almost people have a dream to study abroad. Some of them want to have a better life, others want to challenge themselves, especially, lots of people want to study language in the country where they it is spoken. Personally, I think learning a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken is the best way to improve our learning. There are several reasons that demonstrate the validity of my reasoning : people can have more opportunities to improve their learning when they are in the country where it is spoken, learning some helpful experience in the other countries is not the bad ideal.

First of foremost, study other language is not easy at all, especially, the speaking skill. If someone wants to improve speaking skill, he needs to find someone who can understand and they can point out the mistakes for that people to speak to. So study in the country where it is spoken is the best solution now. For example, my sister studies English very well, she learnt by heart all the tenses and use it very fluently. But she could not pronoun English well because she had no one to practice with. Now, she is studying in U.S.A, and her pronunciation sound very great, it’s improve a lot from the last time I talking with her by English.

Second reason is people not only learning the language well, but their ability, behavior and knowledge also improve a lot. For instance, our later president – uncle Ho, he used to learn many interesting things from the other countries to save our state - VietNam. He knew a lot of languages in a very short time because he study it by book and others foreign speaker so he improve himself many sides in life such as behavior, methods to saves VietNam, etc. Moreover, he made friends with large of major people from Russia, U.S.A, China, and many others in order to overcome the economic crisis of our country. Isn’t it amazing to spend a part of our life in the other countries while we can get that much things to make ourselves more adult?

To sum up, it is a very great and intelligent ideal to study language abroad. People should share and have each others to improve not only the language for communicating but the relationship and experience also need to grown-up. How wonderful the life is, if we know how to take the advantage of study abroad, specially improve our language.

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Sentence: Second reason is people not only learning the language well, but their ability, behavior and knowledge also improve a lot.
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Sentence: He knew a lot of languages in a very short time because he study it by book and others foreign speaker so he improve himself many sides in life such as behavior, methods to saves VietNam, etc. Moreover, he made friends with large of major people from Russia, U.S.A, China, and many others in order to overcome the economic crisis of our country.
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Sentence: People should share and have each others to improve not only the language for communicating but the relationship and experience also need to grown-up.
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