Advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.

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Advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.

Nowaday, whole people in the world seem to be depended on using internet such as water to drink and food to eat. So, How important of the internet in our morden life? In my point of view, it has both the advantages and disadvantages.

First of all,internet can help to link people in the world. people can directly see face to face their friends, family in a long distance envenly a half of the world. The millions of meetings are held and billions of contracts are signed through internet. you can image that if one day the system down and we cannot connect internet, what will happen? I think that the wold would be messed and shut down also.
The second, the internet is distery liberary where people can search and find what they want. This is fabolous data, where store knowledge of human. you want to learn English, want to find a good job, want to find the mr. Right, want to find a good location for a holiday... every thing you can find on the internet.
In contrast, people denpend on the internet too much which led them to disconnect with other in real life. you can easily see a picture which shows that all family member focus on their mobile phone and no one talk to each others. Because they are attractived by entertainment on the internet, therefore people will not pay attention to their children, family members. Moreover, the internet also brings harmful for children if it is not controled. internet can be easily accessed for every one, and parents need to prevent their children from unsuitable and harmful websites.

In consequence, the interenet is very helpful for your life but also become a bad thing if we can not control.

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