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please tell me i explain each and everything so why give me 5 band plz explain mee
Need to read those warning messages in your essays, like:
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
that's reason you got 5.0 out of 9. So next time, put more content with more unique words and the scores will be higher.
Give me mistakes related to task 1
Give me band score on my essay
QUESTION: Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child.
Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school?
What do you think the role of a parent in their child’s education?
Children’s performance in school is always a concern for the parents. A few of the parents does not give any attention towards the child’s educational growth and improvement whereas others show a plethora of involvement in all the academic activities which could have a bad effect on a child. I believe, due to the competitive surrounding parents always want their children to outperform and hence put a lot of pressure on the academic numbers. I think the parent should act as guardian for children, help them when required and should allow them to develop themselves with the freedom, not burden.
Nowadays, technology is growing extremely fast and adopting much more automation. Due to the automation, all countries are cutting down the human resources. Every individual multinational company wants to with perfection with the help of machines. In these situations, if a child would not perform better, he or she would be out of the competition and will have to survive with the basic requirements. The limited opportunities would be taken by the experts and hence parents pressurise their pupils to run in an invisible race since childhood
Both of the parents are equally important for the improvement of the child. What role one should perform id entirely depends on the capability of a particular child. Some of the children require more attention whilst others need comparatively less as they are capable enough to take their own decisions. For instance, the average academic students might have interests in other curriculum activities like arts or sports, hence for those, encouraging such activities are crucial. However, for other children, concentrating on academic education is fundamental.
According to my views, the introduction of automation increased the competition of employment which in turn forced parents to pressurise their kids to compete for survival.
However, parents should act as guardian and provide help them when required understanding the need of a individuals capabilities.
could you please evaluate and let me know about the band?
Hello, According to me your band score is 7 band.
Please check this also___ The widespread use of the internet has bad effects on peoples development
What are the problem about this
Suggest some solution.
There is no doubt that technology is being required in order to solve problems such as studies, business, other problems. However, it can be frequently seen that, many problems has been taken by the web utilisation. This essay intends to provides many of the concern behind this and also contribute some solid solutions to tackle this problem.
To embark on, people waste their most of the time on social media websites. Although social media apps used to get in touch with our dear ones regardless of the distance, it has more detrimental effects on the development of people future. Since masses tend to utilise such social websites in an inappropriate way, it can effect bad on building the future. For example, using social dark websites is not be beneficial for people because it has those crime work such as, drug delivery, congestion of girls or so on. So defiantly the social apps is being used in weird way.
Moreover, people cannot like to going at more palaces because of use of the internet. As information of culture places is being provided by the web, such places cannot be visited. Internet has more knowledge of majorities of places.
Although, there are a lot of reasons are responsible for this, still some solution can be able to mitigate this approach. Strict rules should be imparted by the authorities. Because the internet leads to this worlds, with some rules people must stop to over and hazard use of internet and those kind of rules should be made by governments such as availability of internet, close the dark websites or so on. Another solution of this about make more interest on visit more places as much as people can and because of that they can able to use the web in limited way. Even though the economy of nations would be raised, people may find more way to use the internet in a splendid way at that places with culture availability.
In conclusion, usages of websites people waste more time in the web and sometimes it is danger for their future, but still with some splendid solution masses can break the whole use of internet that I have been mentioned above
Currently, In some countries increasing population especially of young generation is more rather than elder people. this scenario has put some merits and demerits issues. in the regards following essay elaborates a balanced proportion of pros and cons.
On One hand, Increasing population of young generation have a more chance for any nation which could have many advantages in terms of economy and feasibility for their country have a better environment. Firstly, more young generation has a great potential for contributing in the field of sports because in this field youngsters can play a vital role at national and international levels. Secondly, they are healthier and faster technological adoptive generation in every aspect of life as compared to older people. For instance, the youths of China, 1990 have experienced 27 times increased in Chinese GDP during their lifetime. This example illustrates that the young generation has more potential doing any work.
On the flip side, there is some disadvantage for increasing number of youngsters in the same aspects because the large proportion of productive age, so they are required more educational system and children rearing services. Furthermore, the unemployment rate valued be growing up within this issue. In result, more people require workplace and create competition however a real danger to the health of unemployment insurance budgets. For example, as one of the poorest countries in the world, its ever-growing youth population is a major problem in Chad where are proport of the population under 18 years in age compares 54 percent of its total population. There are many youth citizens include less level of education for woman, women's lack of control over reproduction decisions, and a lack of access to effective family a planing assistance. the example shows clearly that the younger generation has many disadvantages as well.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages but a balanced population proportion could be more feasible and viable for any nation.
This essay came today 28.12.2018 for IELTS academic mode in Sri Lanka.
I will be happy if i get same in real exam. Is it really 7.5 band essay? I would be extremely happy if you suggest me the improvements. Thanks -Shamim
Can you please explain why I got 5.5 so I can do better next time?
The second reason is out of topic. the topic is about kids learning, not advantages of technologies.
Many people relish pastime performing activities. Some argue that intellectual works such as reading or doing word puzzles are crucial to do during spare time, whereas other people contend that it is vital to give rest to the brain during leisure time. In my opinion, one should give rest to their mind as it helps to rejuvenate our brain.
On the one hand, spending free time by reading and doing word puzzles improve general knowledge and intellectual power. In other words, reading newspapers or magazines helps people to keep up-to-date with the national scenario and also increases the vocabulary bank. In addition, word puzzles game bolster the analytical power and intelligence as it often requires brainstorming and critical thinking to solve it. For instance, one of my friend who often spends time reading newspapers in break time knows more about the current political and social scenario of my country such as the name of new minister or recent major accidents than any other.
On the other hand, it is often believed that one needs to rest their mind so as to energize it for the upcoming working time. The mind of people gets exhausted after working for long hours and it seems absolutely necessary to rest the mind by taking a nap or watching films. These activities tend to release good hormones and take mind off of stressful work for time being. As a result, one can work again with full efficiency. A recent report from a medical journal reported that each hour of sleep increases the efficiency of brain work by 2%.
In conclusion, though some people wish to read and play word games for knowledge during free time, it is agreed that one needs to take rest during such time so as to work again effectively.
I'd appreciate it if you let me know why my essay scores don't change from 8 to 8.5.
It means your essay level is around 8.0 out of 9.
Could you please check my writing essays??
There is a Nook and Corner of world.....U made one mistake in second paragraph....!!....not noop and corner of world.
hey can u evaluate my task 1 essay n tell me where did i go wrong?
The bar graph illustrates the different problems faced by the residents of some major cities in UK during the year 2008.
It can be said that health services was the major issue in most of the cities, followed by education and training. While, air pollution remained a minor problem.
On one hand, in the cities of Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Manchester and London more than 50% of people reported to have complains regarding the health services provided to them. The highest percentage being in Belfast and Cardiff, accounting for just a little below 60%. Moreover, complains regarding education and training stood slightly above 50% for the cities of Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Glasgow and London.
On the other hand, air pollution being the least complained issue, remained at less than 10% for the majority of cities in question, including Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham and Glasgow. However, in Cardiff, Manchester and London it reported to be at around 12 to 15%, which is slightly higher than the other areas.
evaluation that i got:
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16463414634 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66140899871 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6338451909 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138231618273 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600170817393 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399553140348 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868798643722 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353512010002 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
You gave 7 band for this essay however this is out of task we have to talk about dating sites means locations not about websites
how many scores i have got in my essay //
Need explanation on White space Rule
The line chart illustrates monthly mean temperatures in Sydney, London and New York . The tabular data details how many hours of sunshine they have on average annually.
Overall,while London and New York experience almost the same temperatures throughout the year, the opposite trend is true for Sydney. The greatest number of hours of sunshine is seen in New York.
New York is the city which experiences the highest and lowest temperatures during the whole year. More specifically, it has the coldest temperature at the beginning of the year with about 4° and then becomes warmer month after month. Coming to July, the city sees the hottest month which almost 30°. Subsequently, this figure starts to decrease and remains the same lowest temperature (5°) at the end of the year.
Similarly, in London the coldest temperature is in January and December with just below 10°and the hottest temperature (23°) is had on July. Interestingly, annual number of hours of sunshine in London is 1,180 which is nowhere near as New York with 2,535.
By contrast, turning to Sydney, the temperature starts to decline from January to July and reaches the lowest point with just above 15° and rising back at the end of the year. Sydney is the second most sunny city with 2,473 compared to London and New York.