Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The Author in the argument assert the decline in the number of deers in the Canada's arctic regions.The reason mentioned for their declination
is global warming as the sea ice to melt as well as author also reveals That deers are unable to follow the migration pattern across the frozen sea.
The argument seems to be plausible,its close scrunity will reverals its flaws.There are many loopholes in the argument.Lets look further.
firstly,the author mentioned that deer are lived on Islands of artctic regions.They search food by moving over ice from island to island of the year and they sustain
on the plants they on which they feed and then he claims that unfortunately he claims that decline in the habitants of deers because of ice melts.But the claims made by author
are baseless and he also not provided with the valid proofs in the arguments as there could be another reasons for the declines the population of the deers.The reasons could be
Deers could be caught by hunter in regions. or they might be frequently attacked by the lions,tigers
Secondly,It could also happened that deers may move to another parts of the country ,this is also nowhere mentioned in the argument.So only causes of environmental factors
like global warming could not convince the reason for their declination in the population.As migation is the nature of law. and author also not provideing the exact statistics
in the declination nuber or the percentage of the number of population of deers.
In the conclusion,The claims that author raised are baseless and he failed to provide proper proofs,evidences to support his stand.So that such claims can not be take as valid
for the declinatio in habitants in the deers
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1394 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.647 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.402 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.594 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 12 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of deers in the Canadas arctic regions.The reason mentioned for their declination ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 285.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11929824561 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83745341632 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.8473053892 206% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.918589019 57.8364921388 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.166666667 119.503703932 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.5 23.324526521 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 5.70786347227 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 5.15768463074 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.25449101796 533% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248895384618 0.218282227539 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974710275848 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114944354308 0.0701772020484 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953638462088 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13661899376 0.0628817314937 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 14.3799401198 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 12.197005988 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 12.3882235529 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.1389221557 187% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.9071856287 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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