The owner of movies Galore claimed that in order to compensate the drop in profit during recent time they should figure out some policies regarding the stores operation at all branches of the rental store. one of their branches that located in the downtown could decrease its expenses by closing 3 hours earlier and or dismissing the stock move of last five years. So, the owner asserts that it would be wise if they implement these ways in others moves Galore stores. But they are some persuasive questions that would bring some doubt regarding the propositions.
In case of the recent decline in the profit in Marston, it is not mentioned whether the term 'recent' is about last month or later. decreasing in the opening time caused decline in the expense since they should pay less to workers, although it should be considered that this decrease in hours whether could bring about downsides with respect to stores outcomes or not? Also could eliminating old moves could constraint their fans into not renting any moves could cause recession in the profits?
On the other hand, it should be determined that Marston located in which part of the city and whether it is similar or other branches and these policies are helpful regarding other stores or not? Perhaps closing earlier could not resolve the problem of the others and it would not contribute to superior effects. Perhaps closing early resulted in satisfactory result in reduction in operating expenses in Marston but not on other stores. Thus, it would be feasible take into account all of the crucial variables.
To sum up, in order to accept such changes, it is compulsory to consider all of the possible effect that would lead to reduction in operating expense and the prior recommendation should be determined. there are not have any idea and data about the area or condition of the Marston store to be vigilant in analysis of the component of the reduction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stores'' or 'store's'?
Suggestion: stores'; store's
... figure out some policies regarding the stores operation at all branches of the rental...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...on at all branches of the rental store. one of their branches that located in the d...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Decreasing
...rm recent is about last month or later. decreasing in the opening time caused decline in t...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...with respect to stores outcomes or not? Also could eliminating old moves could const...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'eliminate'
Suggestion: eliminate
...t to stores outcomes or not? Also could eliminating old moves could constraint their fans i...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... it would be feasible take into account all of the crucial variables. To sum up, in ord...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...h changes, it is compulsory to consider all of the possible effect that would lead to redu...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...or recommendation should be determined. there are not have any idea and data about th...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ion should be determined. there are not have any idea and data about the area or con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, thus, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 328.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89329268293 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49736439001 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490853658537 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1406054945 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.70786347227 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11023847972 0.218282227539 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394522437681 0.0743258471296 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537984267675 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648486484066 0.128457276422 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048365071535 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.