Issues of NewsWeek magazine that featured human interest stories on their front cover sold the least number of copies over the past two years. Hence, the publisher of NewsWeek has recommended that the magazine limit its emphasis on human interest stories and focus extensively on finance and politics. She highlights a recent survey of NewsWeek readers that indicates greater interest in political and financial issues than in social ones. NewsWeek's editor, however, opposes this proposed recommendation in editorial policy, pointing out that very few magazines offer extensive social coverage and human interest stories.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The following argument appeared in NewsWeek Magazine editor and NewsWeek publisher. Author had drawn conclusion that Issues of NewsWeek magazine that featured human interest stories on their front cover sold the least number of copies over the past two years.Hence, recommendation that the magazine limits its emphasis on human interest stories and focus extensively on finance and politics. There are several unanswered question which need to be ask by author before argument come in to actual. Before argument holds come in to true let us look in to the given argument.
Firstly, author stated that Issues of NewsWeek magazine that featured human interest stories on their front cover sold the least number of copies over the past two years. Author need to ask question about content which the NewsWeek magazine presented? It might possiblity that they newly introduce concept, so they may lagging in readers area of interest. Instead, they repeatdely print an long story, somthing to disparage an human mind. so people were delibrately shun to buy an copies. Author specifically mention, that least number of copies to be sold over two years old.
Secondly, Author states that recent survey of NewsWeek readers that indicates greater interest in political and financial issues than in social ones. Author need to ask an question that, about how many people are really interested in political and financial issues. For supporting arguments Author recommend that magazine limit its emphasis on human interest stories and focus on finance and politics. Author need to provide statistical data which shows people who interested in political and financial issues and those who are interested in social ones. It might possibility that out 100000 population nearly 20000 people shows an interest in political and financial issues.
Last but not least, author states that NewsWeek's editor however opposes this proposed recommendation in editorial policy, pointing out that very few magazines offer extensive social coverage and human interest stories. Author need to ask question, about how many magazine publisher who offer extensive coverage and human stories? Whether they really got an fame from peoples? Author need to previous records of magazine company who offer extensive social coverage and human stories.
In an concluding, author need to ask several question which need an answer for strenthening an argument. Before making conclusion, author need to review all the points.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 388 350
No. of Characters: 2056 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.438 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.299 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.49 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 172 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 116 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.593 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...umber of copies over the past two years.Hence, recommendation that the magazine limit...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 497, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...thor before argument come in to actual. Before argument holds come in to true let us l...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nterest. Instead, they repeatdely print an long story, somthing to disparage an hu...
^^
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nt an long story, somthing to disparage an human mind. so people were delibrately ...
^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...y, somthing to disparage an human mind. so people were delibrately shun to buy an ...
^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... so people were delibrately shun to buy an copies. Author specifically mention, th...
^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an copy' or simply 'copies'?
Suggestion: an copy; copies
... so people were delibrately shun to buy an copies. Author specifically mention, that leas...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...than in social ones. Author need to ask an question that, about how many people ar...
^^
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rest in political and financial issues. Last but not least, author states that N...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... human stories? Whether they really got an fame from peoples? Author need to previ...
^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ocial coverage and human stories. In an concluding, author need to ask several ...
^^
Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
... In an concluding, author need to ask several question which need an answer for strenthening a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 2260.96107784 93% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44186046512 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57242377419 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.3768350914 57.8364921388 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.70786347227 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471302462657 0.218282227539 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153791977146 0.0743258471296 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186289334869 0.0701772020484 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284778737846 0.128457276422 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163288786552 0.0628817314937 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.5979740519 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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