Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculation against cow flu to be routinely administered
Author suggests to stop routinely administering inoculations against cow flu. For making suggestion, considers there is small possibility of person will die because of inoculation against the flu. Statement made by author are based on many assumptions.
Author is mentioning inoculations against cow flu is routinely administered to all people in areas where disease where detected. There is need of finding that a disease is spreading because of which reason. There might be a different medias which are responsible for spreading a disease such as air, water, on eating some kind of food. The spreading agent for disease should be identified at first.
Author mentions that routinely check up is going on all people in areas where disease is detected. But, it is not mentioned a cycle for routine checkup is it in days or week or months. The cycle for administering a disease, might be in months. If disease is spreading at very high rate, rate of administering people to be increased. so, spread of disease can be controlled.
Author suggests that not permitting inoculation to be regularly administered as small possibility of dying. In many diseases, virus of some diseases get active, after certain period of time which can cause a death or serious health issues if it is not administered on time. so, there is need of finding of cycle of disease and how it affects a patient.
In summary, spreading agent for disease to be identified. The effects of diseases might not be showing now, but it can lead to serious situation such as death if routinely administering a disease is stopped.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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flaws:
No. of Words: 266 350 //more content wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1292 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.911 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.733 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.198 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests stopping'.
Suggestion: suggests stopping
Author suggests to stop routinely administering inoculations ag...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...f administering people to be increased. so, spread of disease can be controlled. ...
^^
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...some diseases get active, after certain period of time which can cause a death or serious heal...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...sues if it is not administered on time. so, there is need of finding of cycle of d...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 266.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04135338346 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96768022156 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 204.123752495 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46992481203 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 705.55239521 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4450819105 57.8364921388 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8823529412 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 5.70786347227 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368204927895 0.218282227539 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131942620759 0.0743258471296 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105065742773 0.0701772020484 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221000118032 0.128457276422 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615871183391 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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