1. Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The author believes that governments should offer free university education to any student who has been admitted to university. it is in best interest of everyone if governments spend people's valuable money for such good cause. I agree with the author's statement to an extent.
Primarily because governments need to understand that an educated being is an ignited candle of hope and prosperity, which can be used to ignite further candles and help humanity to achieve global harmony. In this striking growing population we need men who can think and act in an diplomatic ways and understand the problem in depth. education can help them to be prudent and a guiding hand in the pinnacle point of students life.
Secondly, the schism of poor and rich is waxing day by day and this leads to further problems like theft, murder and chaos. The schism can be reduced if each and everyone was given equal opportunities. poor people if want to study and get a good job or have a status in the society fails because of pausity of money. government by providing such access can change many people lives and in a way help the society by reducing the gap of rich and poor and in turn a reduction in frauds and criminal scoundrels can be seen.
Thirdly, these teens might get that opportunity they were born for. By providing free education we might help them to get closer to their goals. teens are the ones who get easily digressed and indulge themselves in activities like drugs and theft which might harm them and the ones they are close to. By providing free education we can help them in directing and guide them to the path of success and joy.
But talking about the wavier it should need some restrictions like an entrance exam or so because there are many who dont want to study and are forced to, due to the pressure of their parents or the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... has been admitted to university. it is in best interest of everyone if governments spe...
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...y for such good cause. I agree with the authors statement to an extent. Primarily...
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...ys and understand the problem in depth. education can help them to be prudent and a guidi...
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...in the pinnacle point of students life. Secondly, the schism of poor and rich i...
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...point of students life. Secondly, the schism of poor and rich is waxing da...
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...e exam or so because there are many who dont want to study and are forced to, due to...
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...essure of their parents or the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68693009119 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47715329913 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537993920973 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9237047748 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144500352292 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556638992087 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960603754256 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916654205556 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865128230241 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.