The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Today, cooperation is an important part in our society. From this, the speaker claims that the best way to foster young people's leadership is to instill them a sense of cooperation but not competition. In my view, both competition and cooperation are the integral part of a successful leader, our educators should balance between these two things when they are ducating students.
Undeniably, one of main purpose of a leader is to unite a group together so that they can achieve a bigger goal that is hard to be accomplished by single individule. For example, in the computer industry, like Facebook, some members are in charge of developing new function, others are responsible for debuging the glitch in current system, while some people process for the feedback of their customers. A talented leader is able to organize these staff in efficient ways to attain their daily or annual goal effectively.
However, competition also serves as an impetus of the growth for people or organization. If people are put in an environment without competition, it is huamn's nature to become slack, which is unhealthy for the envision of a institute. Therefore, a leader needs to know how to incorporate competition to boost a vigorous environment of development.
Also, a leader who have experience of competition can better tackle with the argue in the group. Competition and fight are inescapable in human group, it is happening in everywhere in our civilization-from the ancient time to modern society. Therefore, that how to effectively solve and reconcile the problem of disconsent in a group is an essential ability of a good leader.
To sum up, Cooperation is a platform that orients people together to reach higher goal while competition spur people's potential so that bring more growth to a group. Also, a successful leader need to possess a sense of that resolve the turmoil in a group. Therefore, competition as well as cooperation are the essential elements in a successful company, government, or industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to become slack, which is unhealthy for the envision of a institute. Therefore, a leader nee...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... which is unhealthy for the envision of a institute. Therefore, a leader needs to...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e of competition can better tackle with the argue in the group. Competition and fight are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12424242424 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11063964026 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7701869167 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257860754057 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812728182002 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867243062382 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133561174564 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624965452572 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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