The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The contention between cooperation and competition in determining the best way to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry or other field is not a trivial one. Virtually there is no developing field, where competition does not exist and i mostly disagree with the claim that only by instilling cooperative sense in young people will make them successful leader, enterpreneaur for three reasons.
To begin, competition is inseperable part of every human life and without the sense of competition, very few people concentrate on self development. For instance when a kid starts going to elementary school , he usually does not have any sense of competition in terms of getting the position. Then competition sense grows naturally and it's required for selecting the best students and future successful leader among all students. Obviously cooperation must be there for the overall welbeing but competition will be at first otherwise all might have same grade and same position.
Not only in educational field competition is also extant in field of politics. Though cooperation among the leading political party is supremely desired, competition rules there. During election period one candidate even does not spare the chance to villify rival candidate. Even if society instils cooperative sense in the young mind it will not have much role in pragmatic life. Competition detiremeines who will lead the contry then cooperation comes.
Industry also faces same reality. Though in a particular industry maximum productivity comes through cooperative team but can anyone inagine all the employee of showing equal capability, skill?Can all of them will be of same rank and position? Obviously not. Competitive sense might urge the employee to boost up their skill and prove themselves. Through their cumulative skill improvement, company or industry will gain larger benefit. Here competition is mostly acting as a driving force. If society only instils the sense of cooperation , then the result would be somehow opposite.
Finally cooperation is vital in social life, and no one can live alone. Everyone is interdependent. However in this fast world competition outpowers in many cases and plays vital role in becoming successful in any field that can be politic, economics , science , arts and so many. So society must instil the sense of competition with cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, then, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41935483871 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95493924001 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567204301075 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2201779124 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435350139197 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111111212481 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111864435828 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242873093283 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145441780265 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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