Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Collage and universities recommend their student to spend at least one semester studying in foreign country. Studying one semester in foreign country seems to be not feasible for everyone. But, I think student should be given choice to study for one semester in foreign country. Young blood should experience new culture new, study method and new environment.
To begin with, student should have privilege to study in new environment. This will help them to improve in different ways. Some collage have good infrastructure which motivate student to study more efficiently. According to human psychology, change in environment plays very important role in developing any human. For example, if we consider Harvard University’s which have one of the best infrastructure and facilities than any other university. If a student is spending one semester in this university then he/she will surely develop good intellectual in no time.
Secondly, student will able to experience new culture and tradition of that country. Studying new culture and tradition of other people can also bring major change in his/her personality. This will help him/her in feature. For example, if a student is going in other country for studying he/she will get chance to learn new language, culture and tradition in small age which will help him/her in feature if he/she decided to migrate to that country. It might also help him/her to introduce some of the good ethics and manner in his/her behaviour. This will surely help him/her to develop his/her personality.
Finally, student will learn new study methods and techniques which he/she may found very effective. Different university have their own believe and teaching methods. So, if a student is spending one semester in other country he will learn new learning skills which he/she may found very effective. For example, Harvard University’s for MBA their teacher makes group of ten students and give them the topic to study. In that group all ten student teaches everyone in the group. Whereas, in India one teacher will stand in front of class and he/she will teach to whole class.
In conclusion, I think that colleges and universities should give choice to their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Some of them will say that they don’t have financial condition to get education in abroad. Such student should take student loan or they should drop the idea and continue doing semesters in same collage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nue doing semesters in same collage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21393034826 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68700475522 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437810945274 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4245694698 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.84 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.08 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258722599605 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909496425046 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907168348607 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180564420683 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785688444199 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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