The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
Given the fierce competition that exists in current world, it will be imprudent to not think about maximising one's Given the fierce competition that exists in current world, it will be imprudent not to think about maximizing one's profits.
Every corporation has a desire to succeed, which in turn fuels it's desire to earn profit. Not just to earn profit but also to keep maximising it. Otherwise the corporation will have hard time not to fail. Now as someone profits, it's bound to happen that the other person will incure a loss. So that kind of situation is bound to occur.
Increasing profit does not only benefit that particular corporation, but also creates a healthy comepition in the market. This ignites the desire to make profit in other corporations. So it's not that only the former will be doing a progress, but it will also be a source of motivation for the latter one. For instance seeing Infosys make so much profit, other technology startups got boosted and even they started making progress. Like this a chain forms that will be benefiting the whole nation.
As the corporations starts maximising their profits, it will not be only them who will be taking the whole share. The government will also be getting apportioned amount in forms of taxes. So rather hampering the progress of nation it will be aiding to it. And as the government's chest increases, the more it will be able to do for the welfare of it's nation. In terms of public transportation, roads, subsidisation and many more.
Also the people who work in these corporation are none other than people of this nation. So if the corporation is making profit than naturaly the people working in that corporation are also getting the money. So rather than creating a conflict for general welfare the corporation is taking along with them the nation towards a better future.
Now as every coin has two sides, it is not wrong to say that some people might get left behind. As the corporation makes progress, only the people connected with it are progressing. The remaining are left behind. This widdens the gap that is present between the different sections of people. For instance, the people who bought the shares of Infosys were happy when the company made huge profits. On other hand, others were left behind as they were not part of that company.
But as the pros outweigh the cons, it's evident that corporations desiring to profit are not impeding the welfare of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...imprudent to not think about maximising ones Given the fierce competition that exist...
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...imprudent not to think about maximizing ones profits. Every corporation has a de...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... profit but also to keep maximising it. Otherwise the corporation will have hard time not...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at the other person will incure a loss. So that kind of situation is bound to occur. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ion it will be aiding to it. And as the governments chest increases, the more it will be ab...
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Suggestion: Also,
... roads, subsidisation and many more. Also the people who work in these corporatio...
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Message: Did you mean 'this corporation' or 'these corporations'?
Suggestion: this corporation; these corporations
...ny more. Also the people who work in these corporation are none other than people of this nati...
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Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... none other than people of this nation. So if the corporation is making profit than n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for instance', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212446351931 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.190987124464 0.157235817809 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0708154506438 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0665236051502 0.0497285424764 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0429184549356 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111587982833 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0643776824034 0.0406280797675 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57498353933 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0300429184549 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00429184549356 0.0016655270985 258% => OK
Determiners: 0.111587982833 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278969957082 0.0249443105267 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019313304721 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2465.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 424.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81367924528 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337264150943 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219339622642 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13679245283 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0990566037736 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57498353933 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457547169811 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.7732114966 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3076923077 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5191512258 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8076923077 141.124799967 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.230769230769 0.674092028746 34% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 38.2416545718 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.29285714286 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455242647774 0.391690518653 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14068995365 0.123202303941 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0899099548999 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56615798622 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169139275447 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174662057416 0.161403998019 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104336781601 0.0892212321368 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346077012402 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0705559936761 0.0692045440612 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286563879638 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973242475352 0.0653680567796 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.4325221239 182% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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