Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The author states that governments should invest in arts as they do in the military. I agree with the statement which author claims.
Art and military both are different ways to express our rage, anger, fear, love and emotions. First, we will talk about the military, Military is a significant factor for the safety of the people of the country. Without military people of the country feel insecure, moreover, any other country can invade their area resulting in creating hegemony. Government plays an important role while deciding where to invest money for the welfare of their people. Taking an example, Russia is a country of military, defence, arms and ammunition, however, not investing much in arts the country as they do in the military they are behind.
Now we will talk about arts, without arts there is no development in the country. Governments of their respective country should invest their time, energy and thought as well as money on arts as much as they do in military. Arts play important role in commensurating with other countries to live with brotherhood. By arts, it does not mean just the artists around the world, it includes, writer, actor, dancer, painter, singer, every other person who is involved in expressing their emotions through any activity.
Art spread love and harmony across the country which should be the language between the countries. War is not the solution to everything. Arts is a form of love that can never be diminished if expressed in the right manner. Development of the country is not only in having the largest defence in the world but in the people that disseminate love, care to other people.
At last, I would like to conclude with saying that Arts is very crucial to each one life in every country to live with freedom.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89768976898 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56126874691 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.210918987 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373702822259 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133144326235 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203082326524 0.0758088955206 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224247793409 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148444998214 0.0667264976115 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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