Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The claim states that, Leaders are created by demands that are placed on them. In my view, this statement is not completely accurate. There are many factors which influence the making of a leader, from their personality and upbringing to their surroundings and social interacions. As a matter of fact, things expected from them may affect their decisiosn but not necessarily who they are.
A very inflammatory topic is that of Born leaders, a concept which many people agree to. Such figures have an innate ability to lead from the front despite the demands from their followers. They are naturally aware as to how any situation should be handled. One clear example, of such a head is Virat Kohli, the present captain of the Indian Cricket team, a self made man and truly exceptional when it comes to leading his teammates from the front when it comes to really nerve-wrecking matches. Never have I seen him tensed on field, always encouraging everyone to do their best and pushing them beyond their set boundaries. Such skippers and not made, but it is their inherent abilities what makes them who they are. Any pressures placed on them is like a tool they use to their advantage.
On the other hand, there are a wide pool of people, who do not have the power to guide and instruct from a young age, but situations and demands favour their luck into becoming individuals who everyone looks upto, as in the case of Narendra Modi, Prime minister of the Indian Nation. After Manmohan Singh's tenure came to an end, there was a lot of confusion as to who would be the next Head of this vast country. That is when, Modi came to light, an individual who used to sell tea at his small tea stall, went on to become the Prime minister. His story is really inspiring and he sets an example for the youth and the adults how at any age you can make the most of the opportunies available.
Another example is that of Aurangzeb who was a ruler during the Mughal times and is still regarded as the confused king. By the time, he came to rule, Mughals had already conquered most of the Indian territory. Despite all the odds in his favour, Aarangzeb turned out to be a poor ruler and so is still frowned upon by historians for the way he ruled for years.
To sum up, I feel everyone can be a leader if they have the fire in them to do so. Other elements only play a minute role in facilitating the becoming of leaders and taking them to the pinnacle of their rule. Demands placed on leaders can only decide their course of action in a certain setting and the way they modify these and come up with a coherent solution is what really makes are leader great.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Prime) must be used with a third-person verb: 'ministers'.
Suggestion: ministers
... as in the case of Narendra Modi, Prime minister of the Indian Nation. After Manmohan S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, still, as to, i feel, as a matter of fact, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48755186722 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40422059773 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533195020747 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9914031624 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117690643446 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388423250109 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417694012318 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682216968487 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392134587437 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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