Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethic does.
Success is a term that has no definitive meaning as it varies from person to person. It swings from achieving happiness to obtaining lucrative jobs, from possessing properties to withdrawing from draining relationships. it is a sense of achieveing something that an individual had worked for. Establishing one cause that contributed to the success is not a fair measurement as it an accumulation many constraints and needs. And yet determing one factor that bolstered the notion of success the most is not hard.
Luck is an important factor that determines the future. It brings you the opportunity. An individual could be a man capable of inventing a cure for cancer and yet without the opportunity provided to him he cannot accomplish this task. Consider Sachin Tendulkar for example. He is an exceptional player in cricket, but what if his parents had not supported him enough in his path to become a cricketer and forced him to study business management, or if his coach didn't decide to fly him to his match that scouted him for playing in national games and decided it was not worth his effort. All of these incidents led him to the great player he is today. Though most people disregard the role luck plays in life, no one can deny that this very luck brings opportunity to individuals to establish themselves. luck is an unforeseen factor that shapes the people and their future. "somethings are out of your control" summarizes this claim efficiently.
The importance of luck for acquiring the chance to get a job or an accomplishment is admitted. But is it enough to keep the job or achieve this accomplishment or make the best of a opportunity that came to prove the ability possessed. The answer is simple. it is not. An individual's caliber and work ethics decide this. A person could be offered all the equipment he requires for inventing a nostrum and all the opportunities to prove himself but he could succeed only if they have the capability to create this cure and persistence to keep trying if they fail. The work ethics an individual posses keeps them loyal to the cause, brings them the appreciation of co workers and mentors, motivates them to see past failures and trains them to see mistakes as experiences and signals to begin again. All these attributes adding to together might even become an opportunity the they might cherish.
when encountered with failure, luck helps to find another route out. Yet work ethics provides the strength to keep walking the way ahead. Circumstances can make or break the person but the way these situations are processed and handled also determine the future. Consider when Sachin's parents had not supported him what if he was persistent enough to work towards his goal to become a cricketer? when his coach hadn't helped him to the stadium, what is he worked hard enough for the opportunity to raise again in the future? This tells that even work ethic plays an important role in arising opportunities. It is difficult to establish a relationship between luck, work ethics and success, although it is not denied that work ethics are more closer than luck is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2599.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88533834586 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91983250758 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479323308271 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.2735169676 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8214285714 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 5.21951772744 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237325579625 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629523166729 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927698620108 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1496559663 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120737772972 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.