Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
In contemporary American society, people could observe many human right movements on gender issues. among these movements, "equal pay for equal work" might be one with the greatest influence among the public. According to varies studies, females are statistically paid less than males in a similar job, sometimes for 20 percent or more. some might argue that men are more suited to work in some occupations, which might lead to them having a higher salary. this argument might stand in some cases, but it should be acknowledged that the inherent physical differences of genders are not the main cause of men and women having varied abilities in tasks.
The first point to raise is that men and women, although born with differed adaptability to physical tasks, are not necessarily being affected by their inherent differences in today's world. although it is true that men generally generate more testosterone than women, and grows more muscle than their female counterpart, it is clear that there is no such thing as a "limit" preventing women to be suited for the physical tasks that men could do. The limit on female's physical capability could be best measured by the Olympic records, which clearly shows that the boundary of female and male physical abilities are quite similar. while this does speak to the inherent physical differences between men and women, it is clear that the physical occupations of the 21st-century do not require workers to push themselves to the boundary of mankind. In other words, there is no inherent limitation for females to be as suited as males in physical occupations.
people might point to the inherent differences in the existence of the menstrual cycle and the need for childbirth as a reason for the question of suitability. Undeniably, females' efficiency in numerous tasks would be affected during their cycle and pregnancy. these handicaps, however, is proved to be the necessary sacrifice for humanity to survive, and should not be considered as a capability problem of a certain gender. when statistically analyzing the efficiency of male and female workers when the females are not handicapped by the menstrual cycle, however, many studies found that the effectiveness of female workers is as high as their male counterparts.
this argument is not aiming to claim that men and women are equally suited for all task, such a difference does exist in our society. For example, average men are statistically stronger than average women, while the college graduation rate for females is constantly higher than male college students. however, this might be more of a result of many social stereotypes than differences in genes.
In conclusion, men and women do have inherent physical differences, and might not be equally suited for all tasks, but there are most likely no causal relations between these two different observations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8841523845 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452991452991 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4651953959 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37959815234 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127875778081 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913697420341 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239647240803 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915559013081 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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