Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
In today's time, the world is moving towards absolute equality between men and women. People all over the world have stopped discriminating between men and women and are looking at them as equals in all the aspects of society. It is true that it will take some time for this notion to reach the developing countries where the mindset of the people has not evolved yet, but one can easily claim that in the coming years there will be absolutely no difference between men and women. I disagree with the issue in hand which states that the inherent physical difference is one of the reasons due to which men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.
Firstly, if we take a small glance at history where back in the day women all over the world were not included in the army, as they were considered to be not physically fit to fight and face such dire conditions of the battlefield and the sole purpose of the women were to look after the house and raise kids. But a couple of decades ago people realized what they were doing wrong and now have started allowing women to be a part of the army and serve their country. Since then not once have women been stopped due to the inherent physical differences and if they are able to qualify all the basic requirements to be in the army then they stand shoulder to shoulder with the utmost respect as any other soldier.
Moving on, the image of women in our society was parochial and narrow, where they were just looked upon as house help who were only capable of running the house and raising kids, whereas the men were looked upon on as the sole earner of the house. But as times are changing the world is evolving with it where there are no such social boundaries between men and women. Women are equally capable and at times even better equipped than men at certain things because of their inherent calm nature and ability to make decisions in difficult times.
In today's worlds women are not looked upon as mere house help and they are not restricted in the four walls of the house, rather in today's world women are being appointed as the CEO's of major companies and they are responsible for taking those companies in a completely different spectrum where they can expand and grow exponentially. For example, AirBnB one of the biggest companies in the hotel space has names his first-ever women CEO to rum its company because they believe that the push they were needing to break further more into the market could only be provided with the insights of women rather than a man.
Furthermore, many people like to critise by arguing that women arent suitable for certain jobs because of their gossamer nature and lack of experience etc. But what they are missing out is that women are more than capable to achieve everything a man can and probably do it better than a man. It is absolutely not about the inherent physical difference that such people look down upon women, it is because that over the years man have developed this disdain towards women and now having them run companies and consider them as colleagues is what is hurting them and they are not able to digest the fact that women are equally capable.
In conclusion, it had never been about the inherent physical differences which caused people to believe that women are not equally suited, the sole reason was that since in the early ages women use to look after the house and not interfere in other matters, the society believed that this is all that is required of women and nothing else. But this barrier has been broken and just in a couple of years all over the world women will receive the dignity and appreciation they deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.6327345309 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 11.1786427146 304% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 28.8173652695 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 55.5748502994 158% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3005.0 2260.96107784 133% => OK
No of words: 657.0 441.139720559 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57382039574 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06280665599 4.56307096286 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2529649311 2.78398813304 81% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 204.123752495 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418569254186 0.468620217663 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 973.8 705.55239521 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5597403499 57.8364921388 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.764705882 119.503703932 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6470588235 23.324526521 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.70786347227 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344513871635 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130708512312 0.0743258471296 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873182607902 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196807054295 0.128457276422 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077710922283 0.0628817314937 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.3799401198 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 98.500998004 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.9071856287 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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