Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The issue of men and women are not equally suited for many tasks due to physical differences is a contentious one. This type of belief existed in the patriarchal society which had widened the gap between men and women. However, in today's world, both the gender have an equal stand and both can do any type of work. In many parts of the world, the women are making their way to break the stereotype of them not being able to do a task because of their physical difference.
There are many women who are part of the army, navy and air force. In an earlier time, these jobs were considered only suited for men and women were not allowed to take part in such tasks which require high physical strength. However, in the current generation, many women aspire to serve the country by joining arm forces and possess equal strength as men. Furthermore, consider the work of construction, there are many women who are part of these tasks. Hence, there is no physical obstacle for the women to pursue the task they do.
Furthermore, women have outnumbered men in many fields like technology, art, theatre, politics, etc. They are an integral part of the decision making of the company or the country. For example, Indira Gandhi, served as the prime minister of India and became the first woman prime minister of country having a population of over a billion people and served the country to her greatest potential. She served at a time, when the woman were not encouraged to join politics and the cabinet were full of man. As it is considered the women are incapable of doing such task. However, she proved it wrong and many women were encouraged to take up roles in the political party and in the cabinet. Also, currently many women are serving the country at the best possible way. Consider the case of New Zealand, the only nation which performed best during the pandemic and it was under the leadership of the woman government. Women are considered more empathetic and hence they play a very vital role on this planet.
Moreover, in an unconventional career like photography or trekking, women are making significant roles. The women are finding their passion and their physical limitation is no more the obstacle to pursue their dreams. Ranging from becoming the first member of going to the space or building high-speed trains or laying down the train tracks. Women are able to see in every aspect of jobs. Considering the area of sports, women are outnumbering the men's record. There are women taking part in weightlifting, boxing and even wrestling which earlier about 70 years back were not considered sports for women. Women have fixed their importance in all the areas ranging for doctor, technology, space, art to distributing newspaper or working in farms.
In conclusion, there are differences between men and women, but it is not encouraged to differentiate both on the basis of their physical difference. The characteristic of being courageous and risk-taking have made the women surpass the impudent of the physical difference. In the present generation, men and women are equally suited for all the tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on the basis of which it is evaluated. The conclusion of the argument is based on ...
^^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n the argument. The cryptic word recent doesnt specify like a year time or a decade. T...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...at deal of useful information', it doesnt specify by how much percentage more inf...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'feels'?
Suggestion: feels
...e flight are quite different. Since, it feel the data are diffident, they are two fu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... two fundamentally different things and cant be compared. However, it is true wi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...tor is negligible. Also, there are some task in the International space station, tha...
^^^^
Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n the International space station, that cant be accomplished by the unmanned flight....
^^^^
Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...t. This postulate is wrong as there are many task which require to show high human skills...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...is postulate is wrong as there are many task which require to show high human skills...
^^^^
Line 7, column 493, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'showing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: showing
...ng as there are many task which require to show high human skills. For example, the spa...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 866, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...wledge would only be part of such task. Hence his or her expertise is require and man...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 896, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...uch task. Hence his or her expertise is require and manned mission cant be neglected. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 923, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...expertise is require and manned mission cant be neglected. In conclusion, the a...
^^^^
Line 10, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of flights. As it stands, the argument is flawed due to above mention points. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00726392252 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67643976135 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464891041162 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7152607669 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7727272727 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702752796368 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244865233353 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325250365434 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401477518688 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264912976333 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.