"A nation should require all its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic course to offer."
A national curriculum for the students until the collage, instead of allow schools indifferent parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer, would probably not working. I disagree so far that the national curriculum for the student until collage. Because a nation have many state and many religion. Each state contain its own language and history. Every student should know what is the history of their motherland. They must learn their mother tongue. If you think that how using national curriculum for student give batter and general education, instead I think we allow schools in different parts of the nation determine academic course to offer.
First reason to do so is that as I mention before that every student must have the knowledge about the detail history of their states and geographic advantage. It is not necessary that student have detail knowledge about other states. They should have some basic knowledge about others but not as a cost of their own.
Secondly, in nation there are different type of people and we don’t know the condition of those people that how they live and how they can fulfill their needs. In some part of the nation parents doesn’t have money to pays fees in school. So if you want to create the common curriculum for all the nation we can’t match standard of all the people live in nation. It is batter to allow schools in different parts of nation to determine which academic courses to offer. They know batter than us what should be the minimum level of education we have to provide to our student.
One have question about that how the collages determine that which student we have to give admission? For that the best solution is the entrance exam. There is only one common exam for all the student create the platform for the collages so that they can easily do their admission process. It is fair for all the student that they can appear in this exam without any difficulty. On the depend upon the score the student gain in exam they can apply for the collage admission.
In sum “for me”, A national curriculum for the students is not the best option. We should have give the freedom to the local area or allow schools in different area of the nation to create their own academic course.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun religion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many religions'.
Suggestion: many religions
...e. Because a nation have many state and many religion. Each state contain its own language an...
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Line 6, column 383, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...in this exam without any difficulty. On the depend upon the score the student gain in exam...
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Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on to create their own academic course.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238095238095 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0725623582766 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340136054422 0.0497285424764 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0770975056689 0.0444667217837 173% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131519274376 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.00680272108844 0.0406280797675 17% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.38087257726 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031746031746 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102040816327 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272108843537 0.0249443105267 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0226757369615 0.0148568991511 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2297.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 396.0 452.878318584 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80050505051 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340909090909 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244949494949 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15404040404 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0883838383838 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38087257726 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419191919192 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.0735624322 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.688291402 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.409090909 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.318181818182 0.674092028746 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 42.4949494949 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.48214285714 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513252742392 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174487499147 0.123202303941 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101427295311 0.077325440228 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.555802551118 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178083078478 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194830104235 0.161403998019 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134920959316 0.0892212321368 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310434408754 0.385218514788 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0715583371049 0.0692045440612 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350762145436 0.275328986314 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160276175624 0.0653680567796 245% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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