A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The recommendation presents a view that I would agree is successfull most of the time. Students can have good overall knowledges when they study same courses until they enter the college which is beneficial for them. Nevertherless, there should be some optional courses to make an opportunity for students to know their interests better.
It is obvious that all students need to learn different classes to be knowledgable individuals. Consider a student who knows basic math, chemistry, biology, and computer. This student is able to make connections between these courses and use those connections to learn better. For instance, this student can use his knowledges of computer to make pdf and powerpoint slides with pictures for his biology presentation. He can save time and energy for his biology class by passing his computer class which is useful for him.
Additionally, students can find their favorite major in college easier when they pass all different classes before entering the college. For example, a student who pass all diferent math, chemistry, biology, and physic classes can know his interests better. As a result, he can figure it out that he loves to study more chemistry classes in college but not interested in math major.
On the contrary, it should not be required for all students to study the same curriculum because it can waste their times sometimes. For instance, all students should have some choices to take their favorite classes to be able to study and get more educated about their favorite subjects which is essential for them to choose their favorite majors in college.
Having general understandings of all different courses beneficial for students because they can be more perfessional students and workers. However, a nation should give some options to all of its students to choose their favorite classes and to be able to enter the college with more knowledges about their favorite major.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...rses and use those connections to learn better. For instance, this student can use his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15923566879 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73941632493 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458598726115 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4633148978 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197143061213 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827625791312 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561837930614 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136024242624 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423938103302 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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