Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before, it means putting old ideas together in new ways.
if we give a close look of every invention happens till date like bulb, telephone or internet this invention has some common things like necessity and inventor’s observation like for telephone is invented for faster messaging service which already worked by letters, same for bulb which was done by sun and fire. but what it seems that these were fresh idea like using electricity for giving light and waves for transferring message. so, we can say every new invention needs some creativity and observation, we can say it is just wrapping up new layer beside an old ideas.
originality has big definition, we can’t describe it in few words but as we agree we can’t judge as thought that never came into picture before. As in earlier time and now, all government body always praises research field in different areas like science, humanity, arts. so, we can say every ideas is reliable upon each other or we can say more generally evolving using one another. Again if we see car, it use engine which was already used in clothes mill, it used wheel which already used in old animal based vehicles so car was made by putting some old ideas in new ways. Even wright brothers made airplane after taking example of bird and balloon.
Yes, but we can decide degree of originality of any idea like how much this idea is dependent upon old researches or inventions. like if in banking if manager wants to implement new interest formula than they can show how much dependency there and show advantage over their old formula as we can say for every evolutionary invention. As for designer about his new suits designs. same for every electrical company can represent their tools unique features or overcoming problems which other and older device couldn't do like multi camera increase picture quality as well as gives new camera feature which is already used in cinematography. so here originality is giving cinematographically experience directly to mobile phone users. so, this unique is explained as putting two old ideas into one frame.
Nowadays, when there is so many community is building, expanding and sharing their work in particular research field. there is so many chances of new invention which is reliable upon old ideas and merging them in different ways .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, as for, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94010416667 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6766180205 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8031612646 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5625 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148217314586 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549579901766 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477264605514 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950989552995 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358074209755 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.