As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for ourselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology advances with time could be a blessing or sometimes a disaster determine how it is being used.
By the passage of time, people concern about what technology could take away from us. Some of them
muse technology might buck our thinking ability, it may deterior by using thecnology to solve our
problems. In my opinon, tecnolonology isn't making our ability to think for ourselves less rather
solving various diffcult problems for us.
Long ago, when people used to communicate though letter would take so much time - weeks or even sometime months. But, now,
technology gives the oppotunity to solve the problem via telecomminoication. It doesn't mean we
forget to think. Think about mathematcal problems that take human days, could be solve by computer within
a seconds. Technological deveopement cures human from verious dieases like cholera, TB, plegue.
People couldn't store food longer days, technology provide us awesome solution like refrigeator.
Advancement in transport, makes us to travel thousands of miles with few hours.
But, another sides of technology that makes us concern that may be with tecnologcal advacement we are thnikning less
. For instance, to enumerate a simple counting, what we are doing! We bring out our smartphone and perform the calculation
rather than using our head. GPS, a blssing for navigaion, yet we are using it to reach our own house that means we our
not utlising our brain in stead of relying on technology. This kind of problems arises. But that doesn't mean we are not thinking for
ourselves. We think for ourself that's why we come up solutions concerning the problems we have. We still ponder about what we will eat, what will
wear. We think about buying about our own house. We think about our relatives. If we are living far away, we try to communicate through digial
medium. Still we think. We search for our life partner but may be in a technological medium. I mean with matrimony website or
social media or though different apps. But, still we think for ourselves, hence we search.
Technology helps to overcome our shortcomings. Whenever we face a problem makes us think to solve it for ourselves. Therefore, we can't just say
using technology to solve problems deterior us not think for ourselves rather it helps us to think for ourselves.
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...eterior by using thecnology to solve our problems. In my opinon, tecnolonology is...
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...weeks or even sometime months. But, now, technology gives the oppotunity to solve...
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... the problem via telecomminoication. It doesnt mean we forget to think. Think about ...
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...ia telecomminoication. It doesnt mean we forget to think. Think about mathematcal...
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...to reach our own house that means we our not utlising our brain in stead of relyi...
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...ponder about what we will eat, what will wear. We think about buying about our ow...
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...ay, we try to communicate through digial medium. Still we think. We search for ou...
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...medium. I mean with matrimony website or social media or though different apps. B...
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...it helps us to think for ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, even so, for instance, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.109375 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77140567483 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7606710871 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0714285714 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.17857142857 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207309631251 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701406726997 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516784103125 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827757292125 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570995208926 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.