As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

While it is tempting to observe the proliferation of readily accessible knowledge that technology provides and infer from that a corrosion of our critical faculties, this is not supported under careful scrutiny. Undoubtedly there is truth to this proposition, but on balance it does not hold. The position I take on the matter is that while there are certainly negative consequences to our increasing reliance on technologoy to solve problems this is overshadowed greatly by the benefits of technology. These negative effects will be discussed first, and these include shortening attention spans, reduced adversity in education and daily life, and encouraging complacency. However, this is disproportionately outweighed by the ability of technology to massively widen access to education (challenging the core of the statement), as well as the colossal benefits to society technology has brought.

Firstly, increased reliance on technology to solve problems can have specific individual problems for society. Consider the spread of smart phone ownership among young people. Individuals who are intrinsically vulnerable to developing unhealthy habits and disorders later in life are exposed to instantaneous answers and information, which is often unverified, and involves no struggle whatsoever. This absence of adversity in the pursuit of infromation can encourage complaceny later in life. When they are grown and facing pressing problems in education or professional life they will simply lack the resilience to conduct the necessary research. This inculcated complaceny can and will have outsized impacts. Those who are not willing to persevere in important circumstances such as school or college research projects, or difficult math problems will likely not make an effort in other aspects of their life. This will ripple throughout society and affect the public at large.

Secondly, while there are harms posed to the individual, one cannot help but marvel at the intense increase in access to education that technology has brought about. There has been a digital rennaissance in learning. One can merely search for instructional videos on complex and esoteric topics and by rewarded with simple and straightforward adumbarations of topics they may struggle with in other walks of life. Further, technology has enabled the rapid spread of education, and is catalysed the global fight against illiteracy. The bonding of widespread smartphone ownership in underdeveloped and impoverished countries with online education resources helps traditionally underrepresented minorities gain education they have a moral, ethical and legal right to. As such, while there are pressing issues at the individual level that merit national action, one cannot question the positive impact technology has had on helping foster and develop the critical thinking faculties of individuals across the world.

Lastly, this forecasted deterioration of critical thinking must be weighed against the intense benefits technology has brought throughout history. Our reliance on technology to solve problems has driven global growth and transformed our species from disparate subsistence farming collectives to organised societies who have harnessed intense resources-for better or worse. The gift of technology has been translated into greater global peace, dramatic increase in life expectancy, better socio-economic standing and a flourishing of human culture. Our history as a species is the story of our ability to manipulate objects to perform technical tasks. Our greatest creation and our greatest benefit has been the advent of technology. While we may certainly reach a point in history where the proliferation of smart devices designed to encourage expenditure and develop addictive tendencies pose a threat (some may argue this is the present state of technology), we must cognisant of the monumental, positive impact of technology. Statements that seek to overlook these benefits and focus on supposed detriments at the individual level do not hold true.

This response has sought to outline how the above statement is specious, and that while it does not err entirely in its gloomly forecast, it fails to hold true on account of not balancing these predicted impacts against the wider benefits of technology. The position I have taken has sought to balance these somewhat legitimate fears with the benefits to education technology has brought (challenging directly the central premise of the statement) as well as the much wider historical benefits. In doing so, this position has argued that there certainly are potential dangers to our critical faculties at the individual level, but at the global and societal level the benefits far outweigh this drawback.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
...ing must be weighed against the intense benefits technology has brought throughout histo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 101.0 58.6224719101 172% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4040.0 2235.4752809 181% => OK
No of words: 719.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61891515994 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17824056563 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07156483469 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 357.0 215.323595506 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49652294854 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1288.8 704.065955056 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7590155293 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.310344828 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7931034483 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68965517241 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121868549297 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323095595065 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260255023238 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716994904722 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109580461509 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 218.0 100.480337079 217% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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