People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

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People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

person is being remembered by the deed he does, A person deos good thing will be appreciated and remember in the positive sense while someone who do bad deeds will be remember by it.

To illustrate, people has a full right to make their decisions and act according but some time people can't do. decision may be wrong or correct but the intention of the people matter the most. Moreover, A small child never wanted to go in the inital stage, but parents presurise a child to step out for school even a child crying or try to malinger beacuse parent knows the eminece of learning. In former case yes the child behaviour is largely determined by the forces not of their own making. but Its for the benefit for the child. On the other hand, If a child is intersed in sports and parents does not allow them to explore in the sport field, then whatever parents does, child will never listen to them.

Further on this, occasionally we became lethargic, lazy and what is benevolent for us starting neglecting it. For example, going for a gym regularly, this is beneficial for our health, but try to procrastinate it for n number reason. To avoid this, we hire a gym trainer which will help to be regular in our excercise. In contrat to it, A ingenuous person wanted to be a body builder, always comptemplate about body building, does not need any stern person to check keep a check on him. Mostly will be motivate by himself because he has a good to achieve. Guide is necessary to make him on track, to track the progress.

In Contrast to this, Now a days its very banal to achive a target or goal people starting making a capricious plot to get some advantage. For instance, In banking sector, salesperson are given target to fullfil like some x number of account should be open in this quarter years, x number credit should be sold. Propably, a common man goes for account open but doesn't take a credit card. Salesmen on the other hand issue the credit without telling the account holder in order to mee the quaterly target, which is wrong but inorder to gaurd their job, salesman does it. By this we can't determine the person behaviour but he does this in peer pressure, but their are several other ways to get tackel this problem.

In conclusion, people behaviour is determined by the force not of their own making.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Person
person is being remembered by the deed he does...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and act according but some time people cant do. decision may be wrong or correct bu...
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Line 4, column 496, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... by the forces not of their own making. but Its for the benefit for the child. On t...
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Line 10, column 22, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...he progress. In Contrast to this, Now a days its very banal to achive a target or go...
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Line 10, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...rogress. In Contrast to this, Now a days its very banal to achive a target or go...
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Line 10, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... a common man goes for account open but doesnt take a credit card. Salesmen on the oth...
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Line 10, column 580, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...their job, salesman does it. By this we cant determine the person behaviour but he d...
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Line 10, column 655, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... but he does this in peer pressure, but their are several other ways to get tackel th...
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Line 13, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tackel this problem. In conclusion, people behaviour is determined by the fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56563245823 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44984085194 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529832935561 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.126222917 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.684210526 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185879700901 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869765396822 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191404425682 0.0758088955206 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197084259248 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.264928136427 0.0667264976115 397% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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