The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.

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The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.

Talent must be appreciated , praised and should be given a chance to be presented.The claim made by the author states that the real talent of a musician is assessed only after the artist is dead for ages.I agree to the claim to a certain extent but of course it cannot be generalized for all the situations.

Some songs and rythms from the 70s and 80s era are even now so frequently played and are loved ,not only by the people of that generation but also the millenials as they would like to call themselves. Even if the musician has been dead for ages ,the songs and his work is still alive. There are some great musician whose work is enjoyed and one among them is Kishore Kumar, he has given so much to the music industry and his songs are loved by people all over the country. This amount of affection toward his songs even after his demise clearly proves the talent that he had.

Adding to it, if the artist has been dead for ages that means that their followers don't just love them because of their fame ,their looks or any other personalty trait rather they they follow them because of their talent and their work in music .

We cannot always assess the talent of the artist after they are dead,but it also depends on the work he has done and kind of effect he has on the people listening.to reach to millions of people and for them to be able to relate and feel a certain way is also talent.

The true talent can be assessed after the person has been dead for ages so the reason that people love to listen to their work is just because of the beauty of the work and not the popularity of the artist.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36184210526 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10711341678 2.79657885939 75% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476973684211 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9530011535 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.75 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 23.4991977007 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263802208444 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126944504411 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728982795401 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153474605909 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595948935348 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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