Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Yes, I agree with the given statement. The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
cooperation in day-to-day activities exemplifies the feeling of empathy and brotherhood amongst humans. it is the defining factor for a harmonious environment. Lack of cooperation will lead to hostility which is looked down upon while choosing future leaders of the nation. competition in this regard is not considered to be the most fruitful indicator of great leadership.
competition for young people is like a rat race wherein each person wants to outdo the other at any cost. this creates a negative impact on the yound minds of the society. competition can also cast a hazy gaze at the target goals if one focuses not on the end outcome but is more concerned about the performance of others surrounding him/her.
even though competition is necesaary for eliminating the unfit at an earlier stage, in the long run competition can prove to be counterproductive. For example, in case of autocratic leadership- where one person supervises the others it is imperative to have coordination within the team to ensure that the task at hand is completely in an effective and efficient manner. On the other hand, if the sole purpose of the team memebers will be to perform better than the rest then the overall productivity will be negatively affected.
Similary in the field of sports, especially in team games, working together is well received. competition in these cases will only give way one or two individuals who focus on personal gains rather than on team spirit and cooperation. even democratic leadership will not hold good in this reagrd. Thus, cooperation is the way forward for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03315017762 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.892918592 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194335633215 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054699169619 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497209939329 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100913621124 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364704020114 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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