some people believe that college students should cosider only their own talent and interests when choosing the field of study. Others believe that colleges students should base their choise of the field of study on the availiabiliy of jobs in that field
One should always select thing which he loves the most, as goes with the field and jobs also, because when we do somthing which we admire or love be feel good after doing that thing. We feel staisfied after completing that job. The students should always select their field on the basis of their interests and not by someone’s influenece, otherwise the outcomes will be not desired and you will regret afterwards.
The reason behind selecting what we love is that when it comes to application of what we have learned in professional fields, we fail. Consider an example. A students who is interested in arts and good at doing paintings, but due to parents pressure he takes other field of their parents choise. The parents feels that their is low pay in arts and very low variety of jobs available in the that field. They wil get abashed in thier community if thier child selects off field. What happens next is the student gets burden that they have to perform well otherwise he will fail. Eventually he fails beacuse his mind is not working in that direction which he wants and will not make any progress in that field.
If same student had taken the field that he wanted than maybe one day he had became a star and made his parents proud are another level. The availiability of jobs are everywhere for every student but the student will make progress when he chooses his right field which he is interested in. If jobs are not avaliable in that field than, if you are interested in your field and have desire to learn, you can create your own job and be owner of your own company.
In addition, suppose a person is born engineer and loves to learn new things that how it was made and what process is carried out pro producing this product, but due to parents pressure he has to select biology to become a doctor. What will happen? Both he the doctor and pateint will have loss due to his inactiveness in this field. We have been seeing this hollywood movies all the time, ever wonder what would have happened if thier parents would have not supported them to become actor and select any other line, what would have happen if founder of facebook Mr. Mark Zukerburg’s parents forced him to become doctor.
So one has to always do their work of interests to get satisfied outcomes and make our mind calm and enjoy our life. One can enjoy their work when he is interested in it or fully into it. Thus, the claim by other who think that the student should select the fields ehich are job oriented than it is totally false.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: A student; Students
...l fields, we fail. Consider an example. A students who is interested in arts and good at d...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'feel'.
Suggestion: feel
...ld of their parents choise. The parents feels that their is low pay in arts and very ...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... parents choise. The parents feels that their is low pay in arts and very low variety...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...hat he wanted than maybe one day he had became a star and made his parents proud are a...
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Line 7, column 534, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
... select any other line, what would have happen if founder of facebook Mr. Mark Zukerbu...
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Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... oriented than it is totally false.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56209150327 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30597646274 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9386836387 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248674669065 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881763405035 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742193697513 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16598517183 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730561699891 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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