Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
The arts have been studied for eons. They bring new knowledge to light and are crucial to a society's development.
The government is usually involved in funding projects that pertain to the greater good of the citizens as a whole. This includes projects to improve electricity supply, projects to build dams that can store more water in times of drought, real estate projects for making better airports, etc. These projects affect a large number of citizens at once and operate at scales that would be difficult for private companies to operate at.
I believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people.
Private companies always operate with a business goal and sales objectives in mind. All of their actions are taken to bring them closer to their goal. I believe if private companies take over the business of funding the arts, they would do it only if it serves their ultimate agenda. The corollary of this is that the arts that is tangential with respect to the company agenda or downright opposed, would not get funding and hence will not flourish.
The very fabric how companies operate, thus, necessitates that the government fund the arts to ensure that all arts can flourish The motivation of the arts should not affect whether they get public visibility or not.
However, this would work only if the government itself does not have an agenda to censor the arts. Democracies score better in this area and are less likely to censor such content. However, autocracies and theocracies are a different case altogether. For instance, consider an Islamic theocracy. Theologists who might debate and question about some aspects of the Islamic religion might not be welcome in society and would be systematically removed and their work expurgated. In such a society, government funding would be analogous to funding from private companies - directed towards an ultimate agenda in mind, where the agenda is motivated by the needs of the government/company and not the people.
To conclude, I do believe that governmnt funding is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and available to everyone. However it is also crucial to realize that in some government funding can actually have the opposite effect of curtailing the availability of the arts to the general populace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...er airports, etc. These projects affect a large number of citizens at once and operate at scales ...
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Line 23, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...can flourish and available to everyone. However it is also crucial to realize that in s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72083757347 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475703324808 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4680648004 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.684210526 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445769946399 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144615045356 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19901648691 0.0758088955206 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292974068478 0.150359130593 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252834126182 0.0667264976115 379% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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