Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The prompt says that some people believe that political leaders’ effectiveness comes from sticking to the principles; however, some believe that effectiveness results from public opinion. I agree with people who believe that the political learders should remain commited to particular principles, for many reasons.
Any principles or objectives in any countery should be came from the public opinion; besides, those political people are elected by public opinion. Thus, if the leader sticks to these principles will do the public opinion and provide them with the most effectiveness can be reached. Otherwise, if the reader follows the public opinion, he or she will not be able to apease all the opinions, people’s desires are different and aims cannot be reached. Therefore, the required effectiviness will not be achievable. For example, in the 2020 United States election, the americam president Trump didn’t want to leave the presidence safely as he believe that he is the best political leader for the states and used the offense. Moreover, there were plenty of supporters to him. If the political leaders want to follow the public opinion, what sould they do? Not all the Americans want him. Therefore, they should follow the principles and the constitution objectives to achieve the justice and the stability to the states.
No one can deny the public opinion’s importance, but to listen to the public perspectives, it is not such the easy thing. Elections and referenda are the tools to know what does the people want, and even these tools should be used under the countries’ principles to avoid bais.
In conclusion, principles and objectives are important to achieve the country effectivness. However, although the public opinion also is important, but to follow them without sticking to the principles, it will not easy to reach the required effectiveness. Therefore, any political leader should first follow the principls, then listen to the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e came from the public opinion; besides, those political people are elected by p...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...des, those political people are elected by public opinion. Thus, if the leader s...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e all the opinions, people’s desires are different and aims cannot be reached. Th...
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Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...nt to leave the presidence safely as he believe that he is the best political leader fo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31948881789 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87600987484 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492012779553 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6244883475 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340115446097 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106882726561 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927794019567 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210189771632 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111991510464 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e came from the public opinion; besides, those political people are elected by p...
^^
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...des, those political people are elected by public opinion. Thus, if the leader s...
^^
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e all the opinions, people’s desires are different and aims cannot be reached. Th...
^^
Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...nt to leave the presidence safely as he believe that he is the best political leader fo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31948881789 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87600987484 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492012779553 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6244883475 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340115446097 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106882726561 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927794019567 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210189771632 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111991510464 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.