Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
All it took was an apple dropping from a tree to understand the phenomenon of gravity. The planet earth is governed by numerous physics and quantum laws deduced by various ingenious physicists and philosophers. These laws can answer various questions about the happenings in one's surroundings and help one to get an extensive understanding of the world. But the prospect that the earth is just a small part of a gargantuan universe, which consists of numerous galaxies and planets with different physics laws governing them, would suggest otherwise. As the human race dig deeper to unravel these mysteries, one might consider that most of the present discoveries are merely based on a hypothesis and not fact. Hence, with the present advancements in technologies, one might find that the world is much more complex than perceived to be. The extinction of dinosaurs was the precursor of the existence of the first human species which are incomparable to the present.
The theory of evolution illustrates the different phases which led to the induction of different species. But one could still not predict accurately, how did the earth come to being? or how did the solar system come into existence? The advancements in gadgets and gizmos have proved to be a boon for the scientific field such that organizations such as NASA can find new planets which may or may not be suitable as an alternative to earth. This does not abate the questions based on the subsequent discovery. Instead, it arises a doubt whether the present important discoveries hold true or not. Black Matter, as an example, might be a humongous discovery if proved to exist. But it also questions the several established gravitational laws and the subsequent laws based on them. Hence, creating disarray in the science community.
One could argue that the scientific discoveries nevertheless, provides a reasonable explanation of the phenomenon around us which are rife with various examples, mathematical calculations and illustrations. It helps one to understand the nature around them and the effects of one's action. Pollution for example, without the discoveries and findings of the various harmful substances that affect nature, the rate of pollution might have been much higher. One could only understand the effects of their actions if they understand their reaction. These scientific discoveries bridge the gap between these issues. Hence, scientific discoveries do give a better understanding of the world.
To conclude, one might wonder whether the scientific technologies could unravel these mysteries only up to a certain limit. It is a bona fide that the scientific discoveries help one to get a much better understanding. But considering that earth is just a small part of the universe, human intelligence might not be able to answer these complex questions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rious questions about the happenings in ones surroundings and help one to get an ext...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...ately, how did the earth come to being? or how did the solar system come into exis...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding phenomenon'?
Suggestion: the surrounding phenomenon
...s, provides a reasonable explanation of the phenomenon around us which are rife with various examples, m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e nature around them and the effects of ones action. Pollution for example, without ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24288840263 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01765541842 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487964989059 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2140509134 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.84 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162042510729 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463004589453 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517272632252 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102012111384 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554515521515 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rious questions about the happenings in ones surroundings and help one to get an ext...
^^^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...ately, how did the earth come to being? or how did the solar system come into exis...
^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding phenomenon'?
Suggestion: the surrounding phenomenon
...s, provides a reasonable explanation of the phenomenon around us which are rife with various examples, m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e nature around them and the effects of ones action. Pollution for example, without ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24288840263 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01765541842 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487964989059 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2140509134 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.84 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162042510729 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463004589453 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517272632252 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102012111384 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554515521515 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.