“Studying foodways—what foods people eat and how they produce, acquire, prepare, and
consume them—is the best way to gain deep understanding of a culture.”
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not
hold true.
The author addressed through thi statement that cultures could be identified through the studying their food precedures such as food preparation and consumption of their available kinds of food could guarantee a clear understanding of their own distinctive cultures. This statement is not true, as it could be illustrated through a set of evidences that are seriously challengng the statement validation.
for instance, the author can not assume that the available kinds of food and the way a nation preparing that food to be edible is a proper cultures' identification. perhaps nation of the same weather conditions and geographical conditions could experience the same available kind of crops for example some tropical fruits, however, these nations culture's could be opposing in wide vast range of differences. Then, the statement validation is not accepted.
In addition, this investigation could be clearly represented by two nation of same food kinds and same foood that is adopted by two nation as a result of their interation through trading, while these two nations cultures are so much distinctive and maybe even speak a=two different lanuages. Such example, illustrated that feeding procedures are based u on many factors and cant not reflect a culture's real identification.
furthermore, the author addressed that similarities of cultures is based on one main factor that could be investigated through food habits or preparing food percedures, while totally ignouring that any other main perspectives, such as arts, ecomoical bases, traditions and nations history as well. Whereas, cultures could be proper classified and identified based upon heritage, traditions and history for example than feeding precedures and food preparation, which could be affected by maybe other factors such as natural phenomenas, and then mislead the identification of distinctive cultures. Consequently, this statement inadequate to be validated.
Conversely, some critics might endorse that studying feeding procedures of a nation could implies a quick identification of this nation's culture, however, it is not exact and could be challenged, it is providing a quick guidance of nation's habits. Maybe these critics perspective is true about only quick approach for cultures identifications, nevertheless it could not taken as guaranteed as can not be used to build a further investigations based upon such quick identification that it is not really in depth identifying overall culture's perspectives. Consequently, the intended statement can not be accepted for in depth proper investigation of cultures identities.
these previously demonstrated evidences are a sample of aset of evidences that bolster this intended statement validationa nd endorse the inadequity and deffieciencies of any implimentation based on such statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...implimentation based on such statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65882352941 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28650380594 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442352941176 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0525121615 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.785714286 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3571428571 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.21951772744 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0627447148153 0.243740707755 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317512728785 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238322562749 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040841043216 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241660231413 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 12.1743820225 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.14 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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