super cinema
The author describes about the people attending super cinema and the quality of the movies.It is described that the number of people coming to cinema is decreasing though the quality of the cinema's increased.
Firstlly the author get the view about the number of people attending to super cinema from the advertising director.he first assumes that the quality of the movies may be a reason of the decreasment of the number of people from the previous year.
Then he looks around the critics view about the movies.he found that the movie makers are doing better than the past.The positive views of the critics clearly shows that movie quality is not responsible for the decreasing number of people coming to the cinema.
Finally the author comes to a point that the public were less aware about the movies and also about their quality.he dosen't blame the people for that, rather he thougt it was the fault of the super cinema .he also think that the super cinema should invest more in public promotion to make them aware about the movie. that will be more profitable for the super cinema.
The idea of the author may be effective in these case.So the super cinema may think about the advice of the author for their better business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e makers are doing better than the past.The positive views of the critics clearly s...
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...ty is not responsible for the decreasing number of people coming to the cinema. ...
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...umber of people coming to the cinema. Finally the author comes to a point that the pu...
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...at, rather he thougt it was the fault of the super cinema .he also think that the...
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...e author may be effective in these case.So the super cinema may think about the ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80373831776 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21065575442 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 215.323595506 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448598130841 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.08504783 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.333333333 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383505316979 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255470900311 0.0831039109588 307% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117941982464 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242867463351 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118333291131 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 100.480337079 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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