The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
When it comes to the issue the main important feature of the great nation, some people believe that having great rulers, artists, or scientists is an indication of the great nation. However, others have the opposite view and think that a nation is not developed unless its people have well welfare. As far as I am concerned, the last point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First, let us take a look why a great nation can not be identified with rulers, artists, or scientists. In the world, we can find many countries that have some great man, while these countries are not developed. I think that an example can give some light to this issue. History was witnessing the many of great man were Iranian such as Kamal-o-molk, who created amazing paints, Ebn Sina who was a great philosophy, who foisted many great students across others country. Nevertheless, their achievements do not affect peoples’ welfare positively, and still this country is developing.
A further point we must consider is that, educated people are another indication of a great nation, because awareness people not only have more welfare, but also they can understand more the situation and adapt it. Indeed, a great leader can not implicate his idea if people do not cooperation, because they have not any understanding about the project. In this way, the politicians know that increasing the literacy rate is the primary step for building a developed country.
Apart from all points I made above, the economic condition is an important factors of the great nation. A low economic growth can make many predicaments in the country like increasing unemployment and crime rates. In fact, when juveniles are not able to find a job, they surly can not have suitable life. Hence, people pay much attention on how they can meet their basic needs, and developed country is not their concerning.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that for building a great nation, we need awareness people and successful economic. Although developed countries usually have more great man, it is not necessarily the indication of a superior nation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227383863081 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.149144254279 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.119804400978 0.0880659088768 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0635696821516 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0488997555012 0.0444667217837 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0880195599022 0.12292977631 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0268948655257 0.0406280797675 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72284431667 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00733496332518 0.030933414821 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112469437653 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220048899756 0.0249443105267 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0195599022005 0.0148568991511 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2177.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 360.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04722222222 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352777777778 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283333333333 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194444444444 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127777777778 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72284431667 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 59.4039467177 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3060935984 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.944444444 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.674092028746 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 48.3333333333 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.30841121495 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409922397075 0.391690518653 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0738257499986 0.123202303941 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0492567175686 0.077325440228 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492554507723 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129628929969 0.149214159877 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143384287577 0.161403998019 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1095358138 0.0892212321368 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299088022019 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0477164660893 0.0692045440612 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273327728691 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100913316215 0.0653680567796 154% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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