The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A great country is the unity of various people of different cultures, living together with collaboration and peace. The topic rasies a controversial issue of whether the greatness of a country is determined by the general people or else only successful people of the country could determine it. Although, most of the countries are only known for their present tradition and culture and not for their past disasters, there were some rulers, scientists, artists etc. who made great impact to the society so that they can remember them from decades. Thus, a country or nation is best known from the people who are currently living there as well as the other great people who had achieved a huge success in their life so that people can remember them for years.
First of all, every nation has different kinds of people living together and they define the culture of that nation. For example, America has a variety of people from different countries who came there for better education or for better job opportunities. This claims that America has great education and technology means with respect to other countries. Furthermore, the countries like japan is best known from their recovery from disasters, since they've recovered from various disaster including the nuclear attack at Hiroshima and Nagasaki which was the most internecine disaster happend in Japan. There is a great saying from a well known leader Abrahim Lincon, that a country is of the people, by the people and for the people, which clearly asserts that a country is determined by its people.
Consequently, some countries are also known for their leaders and other well known people whether they're good or bad. For example, Germany is a well developed country and many people remember that country for the cruelty of Hitler, who was considered to be amongst the most cruel leaders in the human history. Furthermore, another countries like India is known form the great people like Mahatma Gandhi, who had overthrown the whole british empire without even a bit of violence. Now a days, countries and nations are known from the great players like Cristano Ronaldo from Portugal, who was infatuated by many people across the world for their football skills. Hence, some people achieved the greatness by people so that they can determine their country.
At last, people are tempted towards the nation because of their culture, their food, their nature and so on. Consequently, these things are defind by the people of the country. For example, chinese food is an attraction to many food lovers and due to that people remember china for their food. Presumably, the chinese food is demonstrated by the chinese people throughout the world, hence ultimately it's people who indicate their nation.
Although the public of a country defines it, the great people also have the ability to represent their country. As long as some measurements are done, the great people are nothing but the ordinary people at some time who have thought in a tangential way to achieve sucess so that they can represent their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2570.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02935420744 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52230676077 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426614481409 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1850220288 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.380952381 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10283482441 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439771006579 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404424380931 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734799750521 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305015604134 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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