True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We have been hearing this from our childhood that without proper goals, planning and execution one cannot achieve the heights of success. Indeed, success is relative term and on amateur level it may be relative to completion of goals one set for themselves. However, we as a conscious and social creature, the definition of true success has been scaled up to one’s ability to contribute to the society at extraordinary level in various forms. Hence, I feel that considering only goals to be a measure of true success will provide justifications to other factors which affects the success of individuals in our society.
There are billions of people living right now and they all align plan their goals in life and try to achieve it at whatever scale they can, but- the question is how many of these people are considered successful? Not many compared to people living right now, only handful of people are considered successful for example Steve Jobs for building Apple, Elon Musk for building Tesla etc. These people took something considered as bad investment and turned into something which is not considered visionary tools. Nobody took electric vehicle seriously before Tesla launched their electric vehicle and same happened with personal computing, nobody thought that personal computing could become the largest market of computing in future before Steve jobs. The point I am trying to make here is that: the people who broke the stereotype, went maverick, hounded their visions relentlessly and finally affect the world in a way no other person had affected are considered truly successful. If these people just had simply goals and did not had the courage to actually pursue their goals with firm determination then we might have not even known them.
I strongly feel that the collective goal of we as a society is more important than our personal goals if we truly would like to measure the success. We consider Nelson Mandela, Mahatma Gandhi, Einstein as successful souls and mourns on their demise days because they showed us and walked through the path nobody wanted to take and were capable of helping others in their fields. The first two fought for a cause which were collective goals of their society. If had not been the collective goals, I doubt people would have considered them as true successful personalities.
Just setting goals and not planning it diligently or executing it with determination will put these goals on indefinite hold. Planning and executions are as important as the goal itself. Most of startup in Silicon Valley die because people focus more on their objective and agenda and less on comprehensive planning and execution.
In conclusion, to become truly successful one should consider the above-mentioned argument and should consider planning and execution to be as important as one’s goals itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'pursue'
Suggestion: pursue
...ple just had goals and did not actually pursued their goals with firm determination the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13347921225 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66087289787 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516411378556 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5311435833 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168217806211 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622727490828 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044713337603 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100466364862 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345345007728 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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