This topic raises the controversial issue of whether to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Indisputably, major city is the place where a large number of population of a society resides and thus characteristics of the society also. Nevertheless, major cities have museums and art centers where cultures are preserved to be studied. Thus, I generally agree with the opinion that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
First of all, Kings and queens lived in the major cities during their time. So, we can understand the culture of the people from these places as how the king ruled the place or what were the major cultural and social advancements’ decisions that were being taken. People in this place lived closed to the king and thus will be having a closeness of the characteristics it tried to build in the early times. Specifically, commerce is being conducted in the major cities more than the minor cities. How the society responded to the commerce can be found here. Both personal experience and common sense tell us that things can be obtained in a more organized manner in the major cities as it tries to preserve its history. Hence, all the evidence above demonstrates that major cities to should studied to understand a society’s culture.
Admittedly, even small cities preserve some major social characteristics that need to be studied, to understand the characteristics as a whole. Specifically, when it comes to westernization of the major cities that changes the year old characteristic of that society. In addition, there is a diversity of people coming from different societal backgrounds in the major cites which essentially lacks in the minor cities. However, the above argument does not constitute a sufficient support to weaken claim that major cities should be studied, because, as mentioned, records are more organized in a major city for study rather than a minor city where it is unknown how to actually conduct a study of the society.
In conclusion, although minor cities should be studied to understand the characteristics of a society, but the primary source of study should be a major city. As long as measurements are performed like on commerce, or areas like presence of museums, libraries, history of king, study conducted in major cities will provide the base of the understanding of a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...and thus characteristics of the society also. Nevertheless, major cities have museum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11910669975 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10491945914 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464019851117 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0966628848 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.352941176 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203160521837 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877237973694 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937686969109 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153716174004 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788944307219 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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