To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In a world occupied by social animals like humans, cities are the place where one can actually understand the ways of the society and the people constituting it.
The characteristics of a society is more or less, the ideas or the rules that govern the people in a sophisticated environment. What place is better than the cities for this purpose? one can find a multitude of individuals, who are diverse in economy, status of living, occupation, ethnicities, languages, further more, are found to dwell in these cities. Since, such a diversity is prominent in cities, it gives a viable means to study and understand the characteristics of society.
On the other hand, this diversity itself can confound the observer, since he/she are in need of observing a society being a part of it. The observation made, may also be biased by the predilections the observer have, due to his/her experience being in a similar city.
So, by considering the above points one cannot actually come to a firm standing that, studying the major cities is enough to understand a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, may, so, well, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96111111111 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.55969084622 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00831666149 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 215.323595506 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1426839589 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.625 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251766208594 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992064810471 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975576197602 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142938575062 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792615394192 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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