"We venerate loyalty- to our schools, employers, institutions, friends- as a virtue. Loyalty, however can be at least as detrimental an influence as it can be a beneficial one"
Compose an essay that identifies how greatly you concur (or differ with the statement) provided, describing in detail the rationale for your argument. As you build and provide evidence for your argument provide examples that demonstrate circumstances in which the statement could (or could not) be valid. Be sure to explain the impact these examples have on your argument.
loyalty-it is the fundamental basic neccesity of human beings.As individuals we need each other to go through the good and the sad times of our lives aqnd to establish this platform we need a solid base and that base is loyalty.being friends,family,in our school ,employers and instituition all pf them are straight built on the core of loyalty,where one can rely on indefinetiley as a true and responbile person. Why is this emotion play a key role ? it’s the fact that we human beings have trust issues to which the correct answer is being loyal .
For instance a company is made with manifold individuals of characters and background ,little we know about their personal and past life experiences ,but to keep the company running and moving it to the apogee of a successful market ,there has to be a bond which has to be so solid ,that the the companys employers do not go reneged on them or as you they don’t shoot you or stab you from the back.this is what makes the incesssant that the employees don’t give away their companys secrets and the also don’t reveal the companys future market plans and strategy,that’s how loyalty is sharply excercised and its main examination is mainly during crisis .if one also employees backfires and turns out to be clandestine then its over and the company as well as other employees too have to take the fall.
just like in wars, it’s the soldiers true duty to exercise their complete loyalty and and not go rogue on their own country or else it may catapult in a disastrous way.just like salt is the main ingridient to savour the curries just like that loyalty holds that magnificient position.The same way in a family if someone is suffering he or she can share their secrets or their sufferings in privacy to their friends and their fsmily member on basis of loyalty and friendship and if the person he/she shares with discloses it then it causes personal pain and sorrow ,to see ones private life being catigated in the open.Many times it’s the virtue of loyalty which is carried till the last breath-Imagine the secrets behind the recipes of mcdonalds ,the burger king-their recipes of their sauces are trusted on generation to generation given only to an individual who is truly loyal to the company as its best kept by the trustworthy person.The coco cola company yet has its formula kept a discreet notion in the cityof georgia and its kept so on basis of loyalty and no one can change that or extract that with any amount of wealth.
The true nature of human kind of this venerating emotion is also seen in the pristine relationship of 2 indiviuals called the marriage.it is where loyalty is tested on both ends and if one partner cheats on other then this trust,companionship and friendship vowed to be existed for eternity is falsified ,as well as their relationship becomes obscure and decieving to one another.
I truly agree with the opinion of venerating loyalty as a virtue and it all completely depends on who we choose to share it with and how beneficial it is for one but if not excercised in a right and mannerful way it can devastate lives and backfire.
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- We venerate loyalty to our schools employers institutions friends as a virtue Loyalty however can be at least as detrimental an influence as it can be a beneficial one 66
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...hey don’t shoot you or stab you from the back.this is what makes the incesssant t...
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...duty to exercise their complete loyalty and and not go rogue on their own country or el...
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...eir own country or else it may catapult in a disastrous way.just like salt is the main ingridient t...
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...oyalty holds that magnificient position.The same way in a family if someone is suff...
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... then it causes personal pain and sorrow ,to see ones private life being catigated...
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...co cola company yet has its formula kept a discreet notion in the cityof georgia ...
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... both ends and if one partner cheats on other then this trust,companionship and friendship...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2593.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73175182482 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80667504236 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 23.0359550562 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 366.286550032 60.3974514979 606% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.428571429 118.986275619 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.2857142857 23.4991977007 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.21951772744 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24352948465 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113146982908 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593769133203 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141004893179 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444320635087 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 14.1392134831 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.77 48.8420337079 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 12.1743820225 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 33.2 11.2143820225 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.