The widespread idea that people should make self-improvement a primary goal in their lives is problematic because it assumes that people are intrinsically deficient.
No one is born a perfectionist or you can say no one is with born perfection of ideas or skills. A person has to acquire skills through experience and hard work. However, if a person will consider himself as perfect and will be resistant to change and acquire more skills then he/she will face very difficulties in achieving what he/she desires. Therefore, I definitely do not concur with the statement that the goal of self-improvement makes people feel to think that they are intrinsically deficient.
A skilled person is the one who is always ready to learn something new in order to take one step ahead towards excellence and not the one who is so pompous about his skills. A person who is overly proud of his/her achievements or a person who is afraid of self-improvements because it will show that he/she does not have entire knowledge will be in a tremendous loss. Because a person who is more adaptable to change and will to improve at every point of time will surely leave the pompous person behind.
The time will never stop and nor the people following the time. Change in time will lead to a change in technology and ideas. If a person is willing to accept the change and mold himself according to it then only he/she can make harmony with the changing world. Self-improvement helps you to analyze yourself at every crucial step that you take in your life. For example, Virat Kohli is an Indian cricketer. He bats in the middle order for the India cricket team. England bowlers troubled Virat by there outswing bowling but the dedication and determination of self-improvement made him a better batsman and he scored a hundred runs in the next match.
Self-improvement not only defines the learning curve of the individual who is open to self-inspection, but it encourages others also to improve themselves rather than picking out mistakes in others. No one can know you better than yourselves because you may lie to others about your achievements but you can not lie to yourself. I a person is analyzing his/her own mistake then it will be easier for him/her to overcome the difficulties he/she is facing. There is a possibility that he/she may feel reluctant in sharing those difficulties with others because they may feel they are inferior to others but option for self-improvement is never ruled out. For he/she to excel in that field self-improvement is needed the most.
Hence, the idea people are developing that self-improvement make people assume that they are intrinsically deficient is not apt. On the other hand, it provides wider scope for success in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_NNS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'more skills than'?
Suggestion: more skills than
...will be resistant to change and acquire more skills then he/she will face very difficulties in a...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...stant to change and acquire more skills then he/she will face very difficulties in a...
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Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...ents but you can not lie to yourself. I a person is analyzing his/her own mistake...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8536036036 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96914423811 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481981981982 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6397779494 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.619047619 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190053352566 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672258226232 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103427552445 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143536803152 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106877457872 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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