The char and table below give information about healtcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
The bar chart shows the number of beds in hospital with ratio the per-thousand of folks from a-eight country of three continentals, Asia, America, and Europe while the table informs government spending in health affair.
Take a closer to the bar chart, the country of the Asia, Japan, is the highest percentage of hospital beds that is 14.000 units, and the second highest is Germany, it is 8.000 unit beds of the population that is the highest percentage in European countryside. Moreover, the countries in Europe are just under 5.000 units bed in hospital, except German. Definitely, Netherlands only have approximately 4.500 units bed in hospital, meanwhile Spain and UK have beds only fewer than 4.000 units.
In the America continental, Canada is the highest country which provides many beds in hospital and United States shows similarly trend that is considerably 3.800 and 3.700 units. As a result, those are less than the percentage of Australia which is 4.000 units bed. Therefore, America is less country of the all samples which serves bed in hospital.
Essentially, the table provides the correlation among the government spending for facilities and the average of the life expectancy but the evidence could not show the significant relationship, it is because US is the highest percentage of government spending for healthy goods or programs but the average the average of life expectancy is the lowest rather than in Japan only spends $ 2,581 per person but the life expectancy is the highest percentage which is 83 year.
To conclude, the number of facilities such as bed in hospital is significantly to push the average of life expectancy although government spending is not significantly to influence the average of life expectancy.
Sentence: In the America continental, Canada is the highest country which provides many beds in hospital and United States shows similarly trend that is considerably 3.800 and 3.700 units.
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Sentence: Therefore, America is less country of the all samples which serves bed in hospital.
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Sentence: To conclude, the number of facilities such as bed in hospital is significantly to push the average of life expectancy although government spending is not significantly to influence the average of life expectancy.
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