Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
It is believed that young children are having enough free time at home after finishing their school. Supporters of this opinion, therefore feel that this free time should utilise doing extra home work. However, in my opinion this time should be used keeping a balance between study and other physical activities.
To begin with, children already spend longer hours studying in school. If they are expected to spend more and more time on study, it would put great pressure on them. As a result, they would become book worms, less active, and probably find it boring to study and unable to concentrat...
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Sentence: Supporters of this opinion, therefore feel that this free time should utilise doing extra home work.
Error: utilise Suggestion: utilize
Sentence: Compelling them to devote most of their free time on studies does not bring any positivity except boreness.
Error: boreness Suggestion: bareness
Error: positivity Suggestion: No alternate word
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