Writing Task 1 (at least 150 words)
The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs provide information on global population figures and figures for urban population in terms of developed regions and developing regions.
From the first graph, world population growth, we can see that the population growth is increasing steadily from 1 billion in year 1800 to 2.5 billion on 1950. It also showed a huge increment from 2.5 billion to 9 billion from 1950 to 2050. However, it started to decrease to 7 billion in year 2100.
From the second graph, world urban population, we can see that for the developed regions, the population growth remained the same at approximately ...
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Sentence: In conclusion, from the information, we can assume that due to the increase in population growth in developing regions, it result in an increase in world population growth from year 2005 to 2030.
Description: The fragment it result in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace result with verb, past tense
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 9
No. of Words: 160 200
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No. of Different Words: 71 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.557 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.806 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.703 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.289 0.07
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