The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisions where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisions where relevant.

The charts illustrate some information about the percents in different ageing groups of population in 2000 and also predictions for 2050 in two countries, Yemen and Italy. At first glance it can clearly be seen that 60 plus years had an additive trend in the proportion of Yemen and Italy populations.

To begin, for Yemen 15-59 years who had 46.3% of population in 2000 increased significantly to over half of population (57.3%) in 2050. 60 plus years experienced a slight rise from 3.6% to 5.7% between 2000-2050 years. Only substantial decrease observed for 0-14 years, so that their numbers dropped from half to approximately over a third (37.0%) at the same time.

Pattern for Italy was different, 15-59 years had the high percent of population the same Yemen, with this difference that showed a magnificent fall from about two thirds (61.6%) in 2000 to 46.2% in 2050. In addition to this, 0-14 years presented another decrease from 14.3% to 11.5% over this time period. Noticeable rise predicted for 60+years, from around a fourth in 2000 to 42.3% in 2050.

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At first glance
At the first glance

Noticeable rise predicted for 60+years
Noticeable rise is predicted for 60+years

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