The graph below gives information on wages of somecountry over a ten-year period.

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The graph below gives information on wages of somecountry over a ten-year period.

The graph shows percentage of wages in many countries over a given decade. It can be clearly seen that in 1998 the countries had earned highest wages.

According to the graph, among the years 1993, 1994, 1995, 1996 and 1997, in 1994 the countries accounted with the higher wages percentage ( 4% ). In1993 the nations had much lower figures ( about 2% ). After 1994 the percentages goes down to 3% in 1995 and 1996. There is slight increase in 1997, where the wages reached again at 4 percent.

The peak value was recorded in 1998 with 6 percent and in all the remaining years the expenditure have much lower figures, 3% in 1999 and 2% in 2001 while in 2002 the proportion of outley drop even lower to 1%.

To sum up, the figures of wages are relatively uniform and change from 2 to 4%, with rare exceptions such as the wages in 1998 and 2002.

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There is slight increase in 1997
There is a slight increase in 1997

the figures of wages are relatively uniform and change from 2 to 4%
the figures of wages are relatively uniformed and changed from 2 to 4%

Sentence: The peak value was recorded in 1998 with 6 percent and in all the remaining years the expenditure have much lower figures, 3 in 1999 and 2 in 2001 while in 2002 the proportion of outley drop even lower to 1.
Error: outley Suggestion: outlet

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